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Re: Dilmir: A Tale of Feylund
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As for the rest of it: ~TGRF. |
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Re: Dilmir: A Tale of Feylund
Chapter Twenty-Four - Assault on the Mountain is now live! I'll leave you to fill in an appropriate one-liner.
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Re: Dilmir: A Tale of Feylund
I don't remember from my first reading what you ended up doing with Eltuthar but I always felt he was pretty sympathetic.
Customs here Master Set IV/Assault in the Mournlands. William099 is Lord of Blades... in THE FRACTAL COMPLEX |
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Re: Dilmir: A Tale of Feylund
Chapter Thirty-Seven - Plots in Eld'rin is now live! The tale of Dilmir and Eltuthar comes a close. Following are two short chapters, wrapping things up. Through a Tangle of Roots and the Epilogue conclude Dilmir's adventures.
Be sure to let me know your thoughts on the story as a whole! ~TGRF. |
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Re: Dilmir: A Tale of Feylund
For a long time, the tale of Dilmir looked a lot different than the version I've presented. Dilmir was a character from LBV, the fan fiction directly following the Quest for Valhalla. There, Dilmir was introduced as just another character who joined Dan on his quest to ultimately defeat Utgar. The introduction for Dilmir, which, following the pattern of LBV, took place on his home world of Feylund, caught my interest though. Hence this fan fiction.
Because of Dilmir's origins, the tale originally included a trip to Valhalla. I did try to write it several times, but eventually had to concede that Valhalla really had nothing to do with the tale. As far as I can tell from my ancient records though, this was the general sequence of events on Valhalla (spoilers for LBV):
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The rest of the story followed the same general lines as this version, except for the end. For a long time, from the very beginning, I had a really strange ending in my head. Only when I got close to writing it, did I begin to realize that it didn't make any sense compared to the rest of the story. However, I'll relate it here. Mainly because TAF called it. So if you hate it, blame him. (Spoilers for this tale)
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So that was the how the original tale of Dilmir went, which I have never before shared. Do you think the changes I made were good ones? Why or why not? I'd love to hear your thoughts. ~TGRF. P.S. Also, concerning Astia, for a very long time, I had in my head a scene for a fan fiction, or maybe just a contest entry. (spoilers for LBV)
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Anyhow, another few chapters read and I'm all caught up, although there seems to be 10+ chapters missing between Chapter 26 and Chapter 37. Oh well. Here are my thoughts:
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~TAF TAF was the Storyteller... in THE ENEMY'S LAST RETREAT |
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Yay! I love maps
Customs here Master Set IV/Assault in the Mournlands. William099 is Lord of Blades... in THE FRACTAL COMPLEX |
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That is official looking to be sure, just like the maps in my D&D modules. To think of all the hours I've wasted in Photoshop doing the same
~TAF TAF was the Storyteller... in THE ENEMY'S LAST RETREAT |
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Re: Dilmir: A Tale of Feylund
@TheAverageFan
@William099
So like I said a few posts ago, I've been re-reading the Dilmir sequels. I've been discovering again all the worldbuilding I sank into that world, and reliving the unexplored plots and ideas I never wrote. The trilogy definitely has a good number of flaws. The first book is slow and has lots of training. The second book has more training and lacks direction. The third book is paced better but suffers from undeveloped motivations. But there's a lot of potential there, and I feel like if I were to rewrite the series as a whole, and perhaps bring in a lot of the stuff I never wrote, it could yield some good reading. The question is if there is interest for such a rewrite. It would follow the same lines as my Utgar rewrite in that it would have the same basic setting and start, but the story would probably be pretty different. I'm currently at a point interest-wise where I could take or leave Dilmir. If you think you'd read a rewrite series, I could get the development going pretty quickly. If not, then I could just as easily continue where I am. What's your preference? ~TGRF. |
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I’d certainly read a rewrite
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