New Carnage Project

[6FlagsManiac]

I am new here and have been really interested in creating custom's that integrate well into classic heroscape and c3g games. So as my first project I have created Carnage, one of my Favorite villains, and one that I've only seen one other version of here on Heroscapers. I felt i could create a better representation of Carnage. Please leave criticism and thoughts, i am open to changing the card and open to opinions.

[TrollBrute]

Welcome to the site! Since this thread is a marvel custom one, it should be in the in the Comics section. A mod might be able to move it for you.

For the card, it's pretty solid design, I have some wording changes below:

FEEL THE BEAST
Subtract 1 from Carnage's attack for each space between Carnage and the defending figure.

I would have his base attack at 6 or 7 with this. Not sure if the wording's quite right, but it's closer.

SAVAGE
After taking a turn with Carnage, roll the 20-sided die. If you roll a 16 or higher, you may take another turn with Carnage, up to a maximum of 2 turns.

You don't need "if you roll a 1-13, nothing happens in the other power either.

[6FlagsManiac]

thank you for your help, i will ask a mod if he can move the thread. i appreciate your help with wording. do you have any ideas for the special power feel the beast, i don like the name, any suggestions.

EDIT - on second thought i will just move this to the Marvel section, is you have any more comments just find the thread in their.