The Book of Bumblebee

[Margloth]

Probably others who will do a better job of this, but just some wording tweaks I think should happen.

Originally Posted by Tornado

NAME = BUMBLEBEE

SPECIES = CYBERTRONIAN
UNIQUENESS = UNIQUE HERO
CLASS = SCOUT
PERSONALITY = ENTHUSIASTIC

SIZE/HEIGHT = LARGE 9 single hex

LIFE = 5

MOVE = 5
RANGE = 5
ATTACK = 4
DEFENSE = 5

POINTS = 200

AUTOBOT SCOUT
If Bumblebee does not attack from range a non-adjacent figure during your player turn, you may take one additional turn with Bumblebee, during which he does not take leaving engagement attacks. After taking the additional turn, you may place one Order Marker from this card on another Cybertronian card you control.
I don't think attack from range is a phrase we've ever used before. Also, simply using "player turn" in the beginning saves some verbiage later.

CARRY
Before moving Bumblebee, you may choose an unengaged friendly small or medium figure adjacent to Bumblebee. After you move Bumblebee, place the chosen figure adjacent to Bumblebee.

ENHANCED OPTICS
When another friendly Cybertronian with a Range of 4 or more attempts to target a figure within 8 clear sight spaces of Bumblebee for a normal attack, you may add 2 to that figure's Range.
Friendly Cybertronian figures with a Range of 4 or more may add 2 to their Range number before targeting a figure within 8 clear sight spaces of Bumblebee with a normal attack.
Technically the attacking figure wouldn't be able to attempt the targeting without the Range boost given by Bumblebee.

SUPERSTRENGTH

[Lazy Orang]

Yea

[quozl]

Yea

My suggestions:

Originally Posted by Tornado

NAME = BUMBLEBEE

SPECIES = CYBERTRONIAN
UNIQUENESS = UNIQUE HERO
CLASS = SCOUT
PERSONALITY = ENTHUSIASTIC

SIZE/HEIGHT = LARGE 9 single hex

LIFE = 5

MOVE = 5
RANGE = 5
ATTACK = 4
DEFENSE = 5

POINTS = 200

AUTOBOT SCOUT
If Bumblebee does not attack a non-adjacent figure on his turn, you may take one additional turn with Bumblebee, during which he may not attack a non-adjacent figure and he does not take leaving engagement attacks. After taking the additional turn, you may move one Order Marker from this card to another Cybertronian card you control.

CARRY
Before moving Bumblebee, you may choose an unengaged friendly small or medium figure adjacent to Bumblebee. After you move Bumblebee, place the chosen figure adjacent to Bumblebee.

ENHANCED OPTICS
Friendly Cybertronian figures with a Range of 4 or more may add 2 to their Range number when targeting a figure within 8 clear sight spaces of Bumblebee.

SUPERSTRENGTH

I think mentioning not attacking non-adjacent figures on both turns is more clear.

[Tornado]

Updated. This passes but I would like to hear from @Ronin first.

[Tornado]

This passes.
@Ronin could you give the wording a once over?

[Yodaking]

How would you all feel about changing the name of the first power to something more automobile related to better reflect the idea that he's transforming for that move.

Collision Course
Aggressive Driving
Hit and Run
Bumper Bashing
Drive Time

[Tornado]

Sounds good. No preference.
Hit and Run is on the Sports Car.

[Lord Pyre]

Fender bender

[quozl]

Burning Rubber
Pedal To The Metal

[MrNobody]

Punch Buggy No Punch Backs

I do unironically like mentioning Bees or Bugs in the name, but not all the “figures” used may turn into a VW so maybe best to keep it generic.

[Lazy Orang]

Most of those names seem more fitting for more of a 'flashy' character, like a Stunticon or Hot Rod, IMO (particularly like likes of Fender Bender, Pedal to the Metal and Burning Rubber, which I actually love as power names to keep in our back pocket). They also don't get the whole scouting part of the power across enough, IMO. Not sure what to suggest right now - it's 26°C, too hot for me to think right now.

[Yodaking]

I kind of like Punch Buggy. It's fairly unique as a power so I don't worry much about reuse-ablility here. If we start giving other Autobots the same power to move a revealed or unrevealed OM, it would take away from Bee. Someone like Hotrod could also run into people in his car mode, but it should work differently. Maybe something like Bulldozers' headbutt power or Rhino's charge power.