My Halo cards (move if misplaced)

[Alexandros]

removed. Don't give a child unfettered access to the internet.

[Scapemage]

Good revolving effects. Lower your font on move, attack, range, and defense.
He costs too much, make him like 170. And it's not just grenade, you need to say special attack.

I recall you joining CMD... would you like to start voting and critiqueing to help develop our sets and figures? You can even make an army card if you'd like.

[Alexandros]

removed. Don't give a child unfettered access to the internet.

[Matt Helm]

Nice work Venom, welcome to the world of creating your own customs in the Marvel section. Since you're using a Marvel border, I'm sure you're fine posting it here.

One suggestion if I may. On LOOT, you may want to consider limiting it to other "soldiers" and "lawmen". It will reduce his cost significantly but be much more thematic. I can't picture this guy stealing fresh grenades from the body of an orc, a zombie, or Spider-Man.

[Balantai]

Very nice, Venom. I really like your loot concept. I would consider making your grenade attack bit stronger than your normal attack in order to really set it apart, though. Here's what I would do:

Lower his normal attack to 4.

Change Grenade Special Attack to:

Grenade Special Attack
Range 6. Attack 6.
You may only attack with Grenade Special Attack if there is at least 1 Grenade token on this card. When attacking with Grenade Special Attack, all figures adjacent to the targeted figure are also affected. Roll attack dice once. All affected figures roll defense dice seperately. After attacking with Grenade Special Attack, you must remove one Grenade Token from this card.

[Scapemage]

I forgot to welcome you to the Comic Customs world!
Take Balanti's idea, it's a good improvement.

[A3n]

I really think you should just word it like the official Grenade Special Attack (from the Airborne Elite) & include Lob.

Solid looking character, & I like the concept of Loot, great idea.

Aesthetically you do need to work on the size of the text & the size of the targeting icon. But that is pretty easy just time consuming. You just need to keep adjusting until the size proportions look right on the screen, then print it out & adjust again until the print is the same size as an official card. Then save that thing as your template & just make copies from it each time. Of course if you get your hands on the official font then you just need to follow Grey Owls font settings & your laughing.

Keep the customs coming & welcome to the addiction .

Cheers

[Scapemage]

Listen to the people. The people help you improve. The people say use official Grenade Special Attack.

[Alexandros]

removed. Don't give a child unfettered access to the internet.

[Scapemage]

Originally Posted by Venom_killed_Superman

I'll update it in a bit. Right now I'm working on Gorilla Grodd and Trickster for the CMD.

Official stuff first. That's why you are my Assistant Leader