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that is a great story!!! you get 5 it is definetly worth it i need to read more! ( ecspeccially on cyprein!)
want to read a good fanfic? read "after the swarm" and if you really liked that please read my sequal, after the swarm, fight for survival! both of these fanfics have action, dispair, adventure, and marro! it will be worth the read trust me on this one |
#38
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hello? whens the next part of the story?
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#39
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anybody?
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Sorry King of Feylund, I've been into games other than HS lately. I now announce that Part 1 of the Story is over. I've been planning on coming back to this soon. Any fans of it, sorry for the wait, but I plan on adding more in the next few days.
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#41
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ok
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#42
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new entry.
doh! Forgot Jotun! Sorry. Morre about Cyprien next hopefully, Marro Master. |
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Your stories are creative, but you seem to make Cyprien a bit of a bafoon. You should at least once in your writings have him finish someone off, as oposed to falling off mountains or falling out of trees or his prey just vanishing. Sorry! But im a bit of a Cyprien fan.
Other than that, keep up the good work. |
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#45
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nice!
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#46
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Even as a fledgeling vampire you should have him off someone, thats all im saying. He is pure evil ya know. so even without fully understanding his powers, he could still go nutts and rip out a throat with his teeth.
Cant wait for your next story! |
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#48
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or Dessel into Darth Bane
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