The Book of Kang (Uncommon)

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Yea

[IAmBatman]

This passes to final editing! Any issues with what's in the first post, gentlemen?

[Griffin]

TEMPORAL MARKER 1
Start the game with one Glyph of Temporal Displacement on this card. After revealing an Order Marker on this card, at any point during this Kang's movement, you may place up to one Glyph of Temporal Displacement from this card power-side up on an empty space Kang previously occupied this turn.

TIME WARP
After taking a turn with this Kang, you may remove one unoccupied Glyph of Temporal Displacement from the battlefield and place it on this card, then place this Kang on the space the Glyph of Temporal Displacement previously occupied and take one additional turn with this Kang. During this additional turn, Kang may not use his Temporal Marker 1 special power. When Kang uses Time Warp he will only take leaving engagement attacks from figures with the Temporal Defense special power.

TEMPORAL DEFENSE
Once per round, if this Kang or any friendly figure within 3 spaces of this Kang is attacked by an opponent's figure that does not have the Temporal Defense special power, and at least 1 skull is rolled, you may reveal and remove any numbered Order Marker on this card. After removing the numbered Order Marker, the opposing player's opponent's turn immediately ends and the attacked figure receives no wounds.

Change 1 - it isn't necessary, but it helps and it maintains the possessive nature that the rest of the text on the card has.

Change 2 - Opponent's just sounds better and this would help avoid the confusion you had before the change, because if I attack my own Kang with my own Superman, then I read about how you assume it was an "opposing player" that attacked, I might get confused.

Change 3 - same as 2

Also, have you considered that this card has 20 lines of text? That is a bit much man.....

[SirGalahad]

Originally Posted by Griffin

TEMPORAL MARKER 1
Start the game with one Glyph of Temporal Displacement on this card. After revealing an Order Marker on this card, at any point during this Kang's movement, you may place up to one Glyph of Temporal Displacement from this card power-side up on an empty space Kang previously occupied this turn.

TIME WARP
After taking a turn with this Kang, you may remove one unoccupied Glyph of Temporal Displacement from the battlefield and place it on this card, then place this Kang on the space the Glyph of Temporal Displacement previously occupied, and take one additional turn with this Kang. During this additional turn, Kang may not use his Temporal Marker 1 special power. When Kang uses Time Warp he will only take leaving engagement attacks from figures with the Temporal Defense special power.


TEMPORAL DEFENSE
Once per round, if this Kang or any friendly figure within 3 spaces of this Kang is attacked by an opponent's figure that does not have the Temporal Defense special power, and at least 1 skull is rolled, you may reveal and remove any numbered Order Marker on this card. After removing the numbered Order Marker, the opposing player's opponent's turn immediately ends and the attacked figure receives no wounds.

Change 1 - it isn't necessary, but it helps and it maintains the possessive nature that the rest of the text on the card has.

Change 2 - Opponent's just sounds better and this would help avoid the confusion you had before the change, because if I attack my own Kang with my own Superman, then I read about how you assume it was an "opposing player" that attacked, I might get confused.

Change 3 - same as 2

Also, have you considered that this card has 20 lines of text? That is a bit much man.....

Conserved a word.
And he's a complicated man, man.

[IAmBatman]

Thanks, guys! Updates coming.

[A3n]

Comic card.

Cheers

[IAmBatman]

Looks sweet. Thank you, sir.
I hope to be able to get some mini pics tomorrow ... oye.

[Griffin]

Card looks great, and I am extremely impressed with how good all that text looks.

[IAmBatman]

OK - mini pictures! Not as clear as I'd like, but hopefully one is usable!

Spoiler Alert!

[Griffin]

Oye, those are terrible mate. We need better for sure.

[IAmBatman]

I think the last one might be usable - and this is the best I can do with the winter light. I'll wait and see what A3n says.

[Hahma]

Originally Posted by IAmBatman

I'll wait and see what A3n says.

"Oye Mate, those are bloody godawful. The last one has a big silver blur where his front gun should be. Bloody ganky if ye ask me."

Maybe something like that?

Winter light does svck for us northerners, we might need the southerners or westerners to carry the photo burden in these gloomy times up north. I took a bunch during the summer and have them on file to use when needed if I have the right figure, but there are a lot of figures or the right figure that I didn't/don't have.