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Re: The Book of Giganto (Atlantean Beast) - Final Editing
Thank you!
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Re: The Book of Giganto (Atlantean Beast) - Final Editing
@Karat
@Ronin
One last wording change before it gets card art, changing "Atlantean Kings and Queens cannot lose this glyph by receiving wounds unless they are destroyed," to "Atlantean Kings and Atlantean Queens cannot lose this glyph by receiving wounds unless they are destroyed." Matches the wording on Protect the Throne, and is more clear that the effect isn't just a call-out to all Queens. PROTECT THE THRONE Atlantean Kings and Atlantean Queens you control add 1 die to their defense for each adjacent Atlantean Palace Guard you control. Otherwise, I think it's all set for art. @Arkham @japes |
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Re: The Book of Giganto (Atlantean Beast) - Final Editing
Just wondering it saying it this way would be shorter.
PROTECT THE THRONE Kings and Queens you control that are Atlantean add 1 die to their defense for each adjacent Atlantean Palace Guard you control. |
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Re: The Book of Giganto (Atlantean Beast) - Final Editing
For the Horn of Proteus,
"Atlantean Kings and Atlantean Queens" = 37 characters, 5 words "Kings and Queens that are Atlantean" = 35 characters, 6 words For the Palace Guards' Protect The Throne: "Atlantean Kings and Atlantean Queens you control" = 48 characters, 7 words "Kings and Queens you control that are Atlantean" = 47 characters, 8 words |
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Re: The Book of Giganto (Atlantean Beast) - Final Editing
Looks like it doesn't really matter
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Re: The Book of Giganto (Atlantean Beast) - Final Editing
Yeah, pretty much a wash if there is plenty of card space. If text length is an issue, a very small trim but it would need to be combined with other trims to have any real impact.
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Re: The Book of Giganto (Atlantean Beast) - Final Editing
It's going to be a few days before I get my new power charging chord for my laptop. Dog ate my chord and my laptop is the only device I have with the ability to photoshop.
Would I want it to be everything I love...sure...but that's just not realistic so I'm going to focus on finding things that will make me unhappy and work on fixing those. |
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Re: The Book of Giganto (Atlantean Beast) - Final Editing
That's cool, much appreciated!
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#81
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Re: The Book of Giganto (Atlantean Beast) - Final Editing
Generally, I'd go the slightly condensed way as small little affects like that add up across the powers and make condensing easier when and where needed.
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#83
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Re: The Book of Giganto (Atlantean Beast) - Final Editing
Figure cards are up. I believe SW will do the glyph.
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Re: The Book of Giganto (Atlantean Beast) - Final Editing
Might wanna start up a book for the glyph and put links in the OP here.
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