Ronin's Custom

[RoninXee]

I haven't made pieces in a while so my concepts of point value are a bit off. Here is what i have so far and i would greatly appreciate any help in perfecting them.





The only things that are shaky in terms of gameplay right now are the burrow and tunnel abilities. There is so much to put in that getting it all to fit on the card is proving to be quite tricky.

Thanks a lot in advance!

[scarecrowking]

Hi. I really like the look of the models, good choice. Critical Strike is pretty nice, too. I do have a couple questions, though. The Spines ability is a little unclear. Is it 1 straight line, like Mimring? Or is it in all directions at once? I'm pretty sure I got the spirit of it, just curious. Also, the Mind Link ability is a little vague. Do the Vipers all have to be in the same unit? For example, could I activate 1 EOV, 1 Armoc, and Mittens? Oh, and Alternate Mutation is great. A little bit more to keep track of, but I really, really like that ability. Good job, man.

scare

[RoninXee]

To clarify, and thank you for bringing this up because i just noticed it, Spines can only be shot in a strait line like mimring's ability.ying to do otherwise is going to be to confusing. Mind link is as it sounds. It is any 3 vipers you control (excluding any mutants) so you can move 2 venoc vipers and 1 armoc viper, or vice a versa.

I'm glad you like them. ^.^ Thank you for your comments.

[heroscaper314]

You need to work on the wording, and there are a bunch of typos. Very creative powers though!

[RoninXee]

Thanks! ^.^ Do you have any suggestions on how to word some of the abilities? They all seem to fit in my mind, but i can't place where mistakes are. I've never been very good with grammar.