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Re: The Book of Demona - Final Editing.
If this is ready for a card, I can probably knock it out tomorrow night. Maaaaybe tonight depending on how late the top 8 of our tournament goes.
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#242
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Re: The Book of Demona - Final Editing.
That'd be awesome, chap!
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#243
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Re: The Book of Demona - Final Editing.
Nice to see a bio up here.
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#244
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Re: The Book of Demona - Final Editing.
Sneaky edit, Karat!
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#245
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Re: The Book of Demona - Final Editing.
Bio shouldn't be a book.
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#246
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Re: The Book of Demona - Final Editing.
Holy shoot, yeah, just a paragraph, maybe two. Enough to get the theme. If whatever we have sounds interesting, it'd prompt people to read the comic.
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#247
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Re: The Book of Demona - Final Editing.
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She's bloody complex. |
#248
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Re: The Book of Demona - Final Editing.
It doesn't have to be complex. The first paragraph seems fine by itself. add something in about her resurrection and we're good. That's so long I don't even want to read it to find things to cut.
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#249
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Re: The Book of Demona - Final Editing.
I don't think we have a standard of telling someone's entire origin story in our bios. If we did, a lot more of them would be the length of what you have here. We just need enough to know what she's about as a character. A lot of that is right there in your first paragraph, I agree. I'd trim the unnecessary stuff from that paragraph, thread in some stuff about her MacBeth relationship, and cut the rest, personally.
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#250
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Re: The Book of Demona - Final Editing.
I'm not picking on you,just so you know, LO. I do the same thing, and much of the time am told to cut down bios, too. I like people knowing the Indy characters I run. It's just not necessary and really clutters things up.
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#251
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Re: The Book of Demona - Final Editing.
In that case, I honestly don't know what to do here. I don't see anything that isn't needed.
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#252
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I would just go with this.
Then you could link a more complex bio like you have. A cloud can change its semblance, yet retain its will With the intimacy of destruction, One knows what it is to be alive The empty sky holds no reflection, for sorrow - Eslo Rudkey |
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