The Book of Ninjak

[Soundwarp SG-1]

Haven’t really been following this one, but yea

[quozl]

I think the last line can be shortened to get the text size up a bit.

Current:

When taking a turn with Ninjak, if there is a revealed X Order Marker on this card, when attacking with a normal attack, you may count all blanks rolled as additional skulls.

Shortened:

If there is a revealed X Order Marker on this card, when Ninjak attacks with a normal attack, count all blanks rolled as additional skulls.

[LordVenoc]

Since the clause before it is already talking about a revealed X, cpuld we combine them for additional shortening?

[quozl]

Good question!

TACTICAL PRESSURE
After Ninjak or a figure you control within 4 clear sight spaces of Ninjak receives a wound, you may immediately reveal an X Order Marker on this card. While there is a revealed X Order Marker on this card, after revealing an Order Marker on a card you control, instead of taking a turn with that figure, you may instead take a turn with Ninjak. If there is a revealed X Order Marker on this card, when Ninjak attacks with a normal attack, count all blanks rolled as additional skulls.

You could shorten it even more by changing that last line to:

If you do, when Ninjak attacks with a normal attack, count all blanks rolled as additional skulls.

But that does change it slightly so he only gets the bonus when taking someone else's turn.

[LordVenoc]

Yeah, and that's not how he was tested. I suppose "and" or "also" modifies the effect in that way as well? Either way, it has been updated with your change.

[Karat]

Originally Posted by LordVenoc

Yeah, and that's not how he was tested. I suppose "and" or "also" modifies the effect in that way as well? Either way, it has been updated with your change.

Maybe not if you reverse the order:

Current Order

....While there is a revealed X Order Marker on this card, after revealing an Order Marker on a card you control, instead of taking a turn with that figure, you may instead take a turn with Ninjak. If there is a revealed X Order Marker on this card, when Ninjak attacks with a normal attack, count all blanks rolled as additional skulls.

Restructured.

....While there is a revealed X Order Marker on this card, when Ninjak attacks with a normal attack, count all blanks rolled as additional skulls, and after revealing an Order Marker on a card you control, instead of taking a turn with that figure, you may instead take a turn with Ninjak.

[quozl]

That works but could be a little confusing and it's already a complicated power.

[Karat]

I agree, just giving our LD options. Fine with it as is though.

[LordVenoc]

I'll keep it as is. Don't need to make it too complicated. Sounds like we will need an art update at some point @japes but otherwise this technically passes as it predates quozl, but I'd rather have you on board before we go On Deck.

[quozl]

To make it official, Yea after the card is updated.

[japes]

Originally Posted by LordVenoc

I'll keep it as is. Don't need to make it too complicated. Sounds like we will need an art update at some point @japes but otherwise this technically passes as it predates quozl, but I'd rather have you on board before we go On Deck.

Sorry, in my delirium yesterday I read the above and thought that meant nothing was changing. Thanks for the alert LV. UPdated.

[LordVenoc]

Looks awesome! Thanks japes!

This passes.