The Book of Desaad

[IAmBatman]

Made a slight tweak to the torture power that I don't think should affect testing results at all but opens up a slight soft synergy with the Granny Goodness write up I have:

APOKOLIPTIAN TORTURE
When rolling attack dice for Desaad's normal attack, if you roll a skull on every die, before the player who controls the defending figure rolls defense, they may remove an unrevealed Order Marker from that figure's card. If they do not, that figure immediately receives 2 wounds. If they do and it is a numbered Order Marker, place that Order Marker on any New God Army Card you control. You may reveal it normally on your turn instead of your other Order Marker of the same number. At the end of the round, all Order Markers moved by this special power return to the player who controlled the Order Markers before they were moved.

[Karat]

The one change I would recommend. Meant to do it the other night but forgot.

APOKOLIPTIAN TORTURE
When rolling attack dice for Desaad's normal attack, if you roll a skull on every die, before the player who controls the defending figure rolls defense, they may remove an unrevealed Order Marker from that figure's card. If they do not, that figure immediately receives 2 wounds. If they do and it is a numbered Order Marker, place that Order Marker on any New God Army Card you control. You may reveal it normally on your turn instead of your other Order Marker of the same number. If they do not, that figure immediately receives 2 wounds. At the end of the round, all Order Markers moved by this special power return to the player who controlled the Order Markers before they were moved.

I feel like it flows better having the null effect after the other effect. If we aren't space limited.i might suggest bulletting just to make it extra clear. Had to read it a few times before testing to make sure I was following all the parts.

[IAmBatman]

I don't think we typically bullet unless there's 3+ options.

Good call on switching the order there. I'll update with that.

Still need two votes here.

[Arch-vile]

yea

[Karat]

Oh, I meant to vote for you too.

Yea

[Arkham]

yea

[IAmBatman]

This passes.

Wording folks already took a couple passes, and I believe everything is in order, so @tcglkn it's all yours.

[tcglkn]

Oh shoot I forgot I claimed this. I’ll try to knock it out tonight for you.

[IAmBatman]

Thanks! No worries if it ends up taking longer. I'm still getting back up to steam, and your work is worth waiting for.

[tcglkn]

I want to use the dungeon from Princess Bride for the mini background if I can find a good shot. I know that much.

[tcglkn]

Cards posted

[IAmBatman]

Thanks! Looks great.

I propose we move this to On Deck!
Soundwarp - abstain
@MrNobody - yea
@tcglkn - yea
@LordVenoc -
@Lord Pyre - yea
@Ronin - yea
@Arkham - yea
@Arch-vile - yea