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Re: Avengers Assemble! New Custom Project
Good point Chief, it is a little redundant. I guess it would better as " Choose 1 of the following to attack with:"
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#38
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Re: Avengers Assemble! New Custom Project
updated card with Custom Hawkeye from skycycle and Gravity's rock base.
Last edited by Drewman-chu; November 21st, 2012 at 12:41 PM. |
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Re: Avengers Assemble! New Custom Project
regular Hawkeye card
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Re: Avengers Assemble! New Custom Project
And Hawkeye's trainer
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Re: Avengers Assemble! New Custom Project
A sometime Avenger villain Attuma
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Re: Avengers Assemble! New Custom Project
Consider changing the wording like so:
ATLANTEAN WARRIOR BONDING Before taking a turn with Attuma, you may take a turn with one Atlantean Warrior you control. WATER STRENGTH Attuma does not have to stop his movement when entering a water space. If Attuma ends his normal movement on a water space, you may place him on any same-level water space within 2 spaces. Add 1 to Attuma's attack and defense while he is on a water space. WATER DEPENDENCY needs some comas but looks ok. Though the numbers look a bit odd. I would reword it so that it reads you only need to augment the dice if over 6 spaces. then at the end put by how much. So that you do not need to read the whole ability to figure out that he takes no negatives if he is 5 or less away. 6 spaces feels like a huge distance to take no negatives if he is dependent on water. Cool design though for sure. “Have you ever hoped for something? And held out for it against all the odds? Until everything you did was ridiculous? "
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Re: Avengers Assemble! New Custom Project
Thanks for the help Chief. Your wording assistance is invaluable! I have updated the first 2 powers but not I am not sure what to do about # 3. I chose 6 spaces because that was just beyond a normal move. Six just feels right to me. As for the wording I started to try something like you suggested but it gets tricky. I am thinking of capping the penalty at -3 if there is no water on the map at all. Any thoughts?
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Re: Avengers Assemble! New Custom Project
Quote:
But with a -2 as the cap I would reduce the range increment to 3 spaces. “Have you ever hoped for something? And held out for it against all the odds? Until everything you did was ridiculous? "
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Re: Avengers Assemble! New Custom Project
Here's a Atlantean Warrior to go with Attuma. I couldn't find one good comic pic of a warrior so I fudged it, till I find one.
Last edited by Drewman-chu; December 30th, 2012 at 12:27 AM. |
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I'm showing that Picture link broken.
“Have you ever hoped for something? And held out for it against all the odds? Until everything you did was ridiculous? "
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Re: Avengers Assemble! New Custom Project
Should be okay now.
Last edited by Drewman-chu; December 30th, 2012 at 12:27 AM. |
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Re: Avengers Assemble! New Custom Project
And a Beetle
Last edited by Drewman-chu; December 30th, 2012 at 12:26 AM. |
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