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This isn't the first novel that I've read that switched tenses so it didn't even phase me. I must say I totally called it that Andrew was going to be complicit.
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I must say I totally called it that Andrew was going to be complicit.
What tipped you off?

~TGRF.
Probably the part where in his only appearance before Ch. 13 he was professing how helping the Soulborgs get magic was his life mission.

~TAF, interested to see where things go once they meet up again. I hope Mijiek just kills him completely out of the blue for the greater good. That'd be freakin' awesome.

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Re: A Chance of Success - A Fan Fiction by TGRF

I don't know if anything actually concrete tipped me off or not just kind of had a feeling that that was the direction you were going to go.

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so glad those were not soulborgs that shot them down Now remind me Dave is a returning character from your previous soulborg stories correct?

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so glad those were not soulborgs that shot them down Now remind me Dave is a returning character from your previous soulborg stories correct?
No. Dave is Laura's older brother. He is mentioned in chapter one briefly, and mentioned thoroughly in chapter four. You should go back and read the conversation in chapter four before reading this next chapter. It is very important.

I did use the name Dave in The Final Battleground, but the characters have nothing to do with each other. This fan fiction is not connected to any others.

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Re: A Chance of Success - A Fan Fiction by TGRF

Important note: If you do not remember who Dave is, go back and read the conversation in chapter four BEFORE you read this chapter. Dave is explained there.

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Re: A Chance of Success - A Fan Fiction by TGRF

Hiya. One of your silent readers here . I am really enjoying it so far. I called it on Mijiek too. I don't know exactly why, but he seemed too knowledgeable with soulborg technology.
One small thing. When you switched up the Marro's names it threw me for a minute. You used hyphens in the earlier chapter, then didn't in later chapters. But I really am digging this story so far.

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Hiya. One of your silent readers here . I am really enjoying it so far. I called it on Mijiek too. I don't know exactly why, but he seemed too knowledgeable with soulborg technology.
One small thing. When you switched up the Marro's names it threw me for a minute. You used hyphens in the earlier chapter, then didn't in later chapters. But I really am digging this story so far.
I really didn't want to have to hyphenate throughout the entire story, so I came up with an alternate method. Hopefully it wasn't too jarring.

I'm glad you're enjoying the story. The next chapter will be along shortly.

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A relatively short chapter...

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Re: A Chance of Success - A Fan Fiction by TGRF

I think more important than anything is Dave needs to realize that they need to go find Andrew before he succeeds. Once the soulborgs get magic it won't be long before they find his little Haven.

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