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Re: The Book of Phantom Stranger
The 10 is silent...shhhhh
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#242
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Re: The Book of Phantom Stranger
Were you worried 460 is too high or too low, japes?
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#243
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Re: The Book of Phantom Stranger
Synergies & OP/SP formatting look good here.
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#244
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Re: The Book of Phantom Stranger
Thanks! Glad to hear it. I figure this one will be easy to knock out.
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#245
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Re: The Book of Phantom Stranger
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- "skull, shield, blank" seems like the natural order for combat die results - I think I'd break the last sentence of Crisis Management in half. - The "other than an Order Marker" stuff tweaked to line up better with Zatanna. Quote:
----- I also gave an original bio a shot, while I'm here. Take it or leave it. "The Phantom Stranger is just that: a phantom. His motives, his origins, even his name? All unknown. None can say if he is a fallen angel, a time traveler, a man forsaken by God, or something else entirely. The enigmatic entity has done little to clarify. But when a crisis looms over the universe, no matter how far it may be from the Earth he walks, the Stranger inevitably arrives - with preternatural knowledge of the events unfolding. Though his powers seem limitless, he rarely intervenes directly, instead guiding the world's heroes on a path toward salvation. But when push comes to shove, he isn't afraid to tap into those mysterious depths of power and wage war on those in his way." JOHNNY139'S CLASSIC CUSTOM THREAD! | Visit now!
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#246
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Re: The Book of Phantom Stranger
I can roll with all of that. SP updated for
@Arkham
- sorry we couldn't get this update in sooner!
Bio updated too, thanks, johnny. C3G can be played with official Heroscape, but it's not recommended.
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#247
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Re: The Book of Phantom Stranger - Public Playtesting
There was some discussion about what really constitutes a “removed” marker. Honestly the post I quoted below probably solves it, but you know I like to be a pedant about such things.
Other than that, EPB cleared. Quote:
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#248
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Re: The Book of Phantom Stranger
Thanks! Added an FAQ on the issue to the OP, but folks can/should feel free to check how I worded it.
Looks like we're otherwise ready to go here! Great work, gang! C3G can be played with official Heroscape, but it's not recommended.
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Re: The Book of Phantom Stranger
In the bio:
'But' is a conjunction, and sentences shouldn't begin with conjunctions. In both cases, it could use tweaking it. Changing it to 'However,' (note the comma) is probably the simplest way, though you could also fiddle with sentence structure/merge sentences etc. if you prefer. Otherwise, cleared. |
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C3G can be played with official Heroscape, but it's not recommended.
DISCLAIMER: C3G claims no ownership of the characters or artwork used for C3G customs. All rights for the characters belong to their respective publishers/creators. C3G cards are not intended for sale, and C3G does not authorize any party to profit from C3G cards. |
#251
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Re: The Book of Phantom Stranger
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The main question, I'd have said, is whether a bio counts as 'formal' writing. Personally, I'd have said yes, but I get that that's open for interpretation. |
#252
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Re: The Book of Phantom Stranger
I think it's more of a changing of society idioms type thing. When I went to school we were taught never to start a sentence with a conjunction. But (see what i did there ) today there is more tendency for standards to be focused on shorter sentences & thus ending a contrast or clause sentence rather than using commas to continue them on. Maybe that is more the key, less use of commas .
It definitely seems that we (society as a whole) are moving away from what is "formal" & towards a free-form structure. I blame millennials . Seriously the age of millennials has taken us away from a lot of structure in a lot of things, not just language. Some things I would agree are for the betterment of society, some just seem like they are being lazy. And others just seem like it's done to try to get a reaction from X & Ys or at least drive them crazy. My Maps: Classic; Marvel My Customs: Dr Who | Terrain | Star Wars Card Template | Repaint & Mods | Playing Card sized Cards Helmaverse | Helmaverse League International C3G Links: C3G Super Hero Draft cards | TableTop Simulator C3G Map additions | Heroscape Dice Roller |
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