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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story

All typos have been fixed. Another chapter I just read not too long ago yet still rife with misspellings. I even found an unmentioned typo just going back to fix the others

No comment on the other comments so close to the end, other than to advise reading Ch. 31 in chunks because it is long.

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Old February 15th, 2024, 08:39 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story

Chapters 31-32:
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story

Feedback:

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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story

Apostle's Creed Final Review:
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story

Apologies for the belated reply:

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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story

Wow it only took eight days to reply! I'm getting faster

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