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Old May 13th, 2017, 07:14 PM
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Re: A Chance of Success - A Fan Fiction by TGRF

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I think more important than anything is Dave needs to realize that they need to go find Andrew before he succeeds. Once the soulborgs get magic it won't be long before they find his little Haven.
True, but they have no idea what they're going to find. Andrew is likely surrounded by soulborgs, and a small force with mismatched and outdated weaponry really wouldn't stand much of a chance. It would be suicide.

Remember this is a big soulborg base. They can see anything but an SRV from miles away and shoot it from the sky. SRV's are tiny, and Dave only has a few. He could get maybe thirty men in, and for all he knows, they would be obliterated the moment they entered the base. Assuming they can even get in, of course. Having Mijiek solves a few problems, but even he doesn't know what to expect.

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Old May 14th, 2017, 12:03 PM
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Re: A Chance of Success - A Fan Fiction by TGRF

And now I give to you, the most heavily edited chapter in the entire fan fiction. During the editing process, there were a lot of problems with this chapter, which resulted in it being cut in half. So due to the short nature of it, I will be posting another chapter when I get back from church.

Chapter Eighteen
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Re: A Chance of Success - A Fan Fiction by TGRF

Is this meant to be a time lapse between the two chapters? Or are the soulborgs pulling a fast one on Andrew?

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Is this meant to be a time lapse between the two chapters? Or are the soulborgs pulling a fast one on Andrew?
All I can saw is there is no time difference. All things happen in order. When it says, "far away, Andrew covered his eyes..." that means the events are occurring at the same time as the previous events.

So as to how the soulborgs got Laura... you will have to speculate.

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Is this meant to be a time lapse between the two chapters? Or are the soulborgs pulling a fast one on Andrew?
All I can saw is there is no time difference. All things happen in order. When it says, "far away, Andrew covered his eyes..." that means the events are occurring at the same time as the previous events.

So as to how the soulborgs got Laura... you will have to speculate.

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Well obviously it's another soulborg like mijek.

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Old May 15th, 2017, 11:04 AM
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Is this meant to be a time lapse between the two chapters? Or are the soulborgs pulling a fast one on Andrew?
All I can saw is there is no time difference. All things happen in order. When it says, "far away, Andrew covered his eyes..." that means the events are occurring at the same time as the previous events.

So as to how the soulborgs got Laura... you will have to speculate.

~TGRF.
Well obviously it's another soulborg like mijek.
You can never know about these things.

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Old May 15th, 2017, 01:41 PM
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Re: A Chance of Success - A Fan Fiction by TGRF

And so we arrive at the beginning of the climax. Before that happens though...

Yesterday I discovered information which flies in the face of a very central part of writing I thought I had a good grasp on. All writing endeavors, including 4114 and all novels, are on temporary hold until I can figure out how things work again. It could take anywhere from a day to several weeks. Just FYI.

And now, on with the tale at hand...

Chapter Twenty
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Re: A Chance of Success - A Fan Fiction by TGRF

Ugh. Dang it I hoped I was wrong about Garonka.

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Chapter Twenty-One
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The revelations begin...

Chapter Twenty-Two
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