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Old April 6th, 2022, 01:25 AM
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Re: Help With Wurdz

There were trebuchet cards kicking around here a long while ago that may be a good reference for these.

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Re: Help With Wurdz

I've been working on DOs like this as well, a 2 space boat and a cannon, and for ownership I went with the idea all destructible objects are ownerless even if drafted into an army. To use a power on a DO, you had to meet certain requirements, such as no opponents figures can be adjacent to the DO or the figure using it. This way you don't need to have an ability on the card defining when ownership transfers.

Also keeping OMs off DO cards helps show that anyone can use it and keeps them from wasting OMs should your opponent capture the DOs

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Old August 13th, 2022, 01:36 AM
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Re: Help With Wurdz

I don't know if you're still doing this but I thought I would swing by anyhow. I'm not looking for the most official or "compatible" wording, just the clearest to the reader.
LIFE LINK
Before the game starts, pick one friendly hero Army Card to be Quiella's Life Link. At the start of Quiella's turn, you may transfer a wound marker from that Army Card to this Army Card, if possible.

SMITE EVIL
At the beginning of the game, choose an Army Card that follows Utgar or Valkrill. Against figures from the chosen Army Card Quiella rolls two additional attack dice and one additional defense die.

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Re: Help With Wurdz

The second sentence in Smite would look better if you reversed its two component parts: “Quiella rolls two additional . . . against figures from the/that chosen army card.”

Looks good otherwise. Life Link seems to be quite powerful but you know that already. Particularly so if Quiella bonds.

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Re: Help With Wurdz

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The second sentence in Smite would look better if you reversed its two component parts: “Quiella rolls two additional . . . against figures from the/that chosen army card.”

Looks good otherwise. Life Link seems to be quite powerful but you know that already. Particularly so if Quiella bonds.
Thank you! Since they start with the same clause, I made the wording match there too. She can also heal herself. But she has other limitations and all of this healing requires activating her. She should be quite good in dungeon crawl scenarios. I'm not as sure about tournament-style games. Have a look in the thread in my signature for the full card.

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Re: Help With Wurdz

Copying the sentence structure like that was too clever by half. I prefer my way but do what you please. Thanks for sharing!

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Re: Help With Wurdz

I think you misunderstood me? In one power I had "before the game starts" and in the other I had "At the beginning of the game." They mean the same thing and the latter sounds more in line with other cards, so I made them match it. I didn't see you comment on that part of the text at all.

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Re: Help With Wurdz

Ah. I did misunderstand you. I thought you were trying to keep some weird sentence structure parallel inside the power.

Regardless, the point of writing is to be in service to the reader. Make it as helpful as possible to your readers, with all other considerations being lesser priorities.

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