Dilmir: A Tale of Feylund

[TGRF]

Chapter Sixteen - Bloodline is now live! I will also be releasing the glossary along with the next chapter, most likely tomorrow.



~TGRF.

[William099]

Man I forgot how much I love these stories

[TheAverageFan]

Okay--I'm finally all caught up, and I can say with certainty that things are getting interesting now.

Spoiler Alert!

I had a mild feeling this would be one of those "bad guys might actually be good guys and vise versa" stories, but we'll see where that goes in regards to the dark elf characters. It could always be a double-gotcha.

~TAF

[TGRF]

Sorry about the delay. Chapter Seventeen - A Familiar Tale is now live! The shadowy tale of Eltuthar the black is finally uncovered, as Dilmir continues his banishment.



~TGRF.

[TGRF]

Chapter Eighteen - The Choice has been Made is now live! Dilmir's banishment continues, but his troubles are far from ended.

Also, as promised, the Glossary is now public, and can be found at the top of the drop down for the fan fiction. I withheld it until now because there was a spoiler to the fact that Dilmir eventually met up with Eltuthar. I don't think any other spoilers can be ascertained from it now.

When I first posted this, I remember there being some confusion about who was who and such, so if something isn't clear, don't hesitate to ask.

~TGRF.

[TheAverageFan]

Originally Posted by The Grim Reaper's Friend

When I first posted this, I remember there being some confusion about who was who and such, so if something isn't clear, don't hesitate to ask.

I'll admit I was mildly confused at first because I thought the character of Felnir was Felmir. I mean, n and m are pretty close as far as letters go.

~TAF

[William099]

Such a great chapter title!

[William099]

Woot woot! Ilrin is such a great character

[TGRF]

Chapter Twenty - Treason is now live! Ilrin comes to a decision about what she must do, but will she succeed in time?



~TGRF.

[TGRF]

Chapter Twenty-One - Approach is now live! The Great Forest beyond the Ans Aras is no place for an elf to wander...



~TGRF.

[TGRF]

Chapter Twenty-Two - The Work of Eltuthar is now live! Ilrin comes face to face with the dreaded Eltuthar the Black.



~TGRF.

[TheAverageFan]

Keeping up, although I continue to bounce back and forth between my hedged bets on where the story's going. Right now I think the Dark Elves are clearly not evil at this point, but I still think Eltuthar is gonna turn out to be bad. The council--however antagonistic towards our hero--doesn't have enough named characters to house a main villain right now. If age = power in this universe, Eltuthar's gonna be pretty darned strong if he gets his limiter removed. And then he'll turn out to be an a-hole or something.

Also there's a weird typo in Ch. 19:

In just four days, he had begun drawing all attention back to himself2036, until he had nearly killed Aldir.

Perhaps it's a skim-check to see if the reader's really reading

~TAF