Re: The Book of Yamcha
Pre-release checks:
1. EI: The sentence "Yamcha may only attack during that turn if you lost initiative" is vague. It could be read that he can "only attack," i.e. not move, if you lose initiative. It could mean that if you win initiative, he cannot attack, because he can "only attack" if you lose. From the comments (Post 26 "Always keeps him mobile but he's not just guaranteed free attacks."), it means the latter - he can't attack if you won initiative, only if you lost.
Suggestion for clarity, "If you won initiative, Yamcha may not attack during that turn." I think putting the conditional phrase first and switching the win/lose makes it easier to understand.
2. SP: WFFSA: remove the first "with" from the first sentence. Currently, it says "Yamcha may attack with the same figure with..."
|