The DEFUNCT Book of Vehicle Rules - Locked

[SirGalahad]

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[IAmBatman]

Originally Posted by A3n

Can we make this (or something better, if the word smiths can make it so) addition:

Originally Posted by SirGalahad

I'll be able to take a thorough read later today.

Thanks. I'm a bit burned out on the text here at the moment and I bet Griff is as well, so some fresh eyes are definitely appreciated.

I'll definitely turn my focus back to this before the release, but it's Icicle or bust for me these next two days!

[SirGalahad]

Originally Posted by SirGalahad

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Still can't see the PDF.

[IAmBatman]

Yeah, me neither.

[tcglkn]

Fixed the link here.

[IAmBatman]

Thanks!

[SirGalahad]

Looks great! Couple minor suggestions:

Cover - MAYHEM IN THE STREETS!
To drive or not to drive -- that is the question. Will your superhero get in the vehicle or will he just throw it?

(Because we have female superheroes)

ENTERING VEHICLES - 2nd bullet
capitalize "Occupancy" in both places before "number"

(consistency with other numbers)

The red box to the right of EXAMPLE 1: If a figure of the correct size ends its movement adjacent to a vehicle that has not reached its Occupancy number and has no other players' figures occupying it, the figure can enter that vehicle.

EXAMPLE 2: The Sports Car has an Occupancy number of 2. Jubilee, who is already occupying the Sports Car, is in Gambit's army. As a medium figure, Gambit can enter this vehicle.

(includes all conditions)

EXAMPLE 3: With Gambit and Jubilee occupying the Sports Car, the player controlling them uses Jubilee's turn to move the vehicle. After moving, the player then decides both figures will exit the Sports Car by placing each of them on empty spaces adjacent to the vehicle. The controlling player may now use Jubilee to attack if they desired.

(clarity and number agreement)

EXAMPLE 4: When a vehicle is destroyed, each occupying figures is placed on one of the spaces that the vehicle occupied before being destroyed (in this example, the 2 red spaces indicated in the picture below).

In this example, Jubilee would be destroyed because she has a height of 4 and there are only 3 levels underneath the overhang. Because Jubilee cannot be legally placed there, she is destroyed. If Jubilee were an Event Hero, she would receive 4 wounds and could not be placed on the battlefield.

(avoids repetition, number agreement, subjunctive verb)


And I'm even OK with "symbolise"

[IAmBatman]

"Will you Superhero" should be "Will your Superhero," right?

[tcglkn]

Originally Posted by SirGalahad

Cover - MAYHEM IN THE STREETS!
To drive or not to drive -- that is the question. Will you superhero get in the vehicle or will he just throw it?

I agree with those edits, but you left the "r" out of "your superhero". Just incase A3n goes to copy and paste that for some reason.

[IAmBatman]

Sir G - could you do me a huge favor and edit the legacy text with all of your changes for ease of update for A3n? I think we're in agreement with your logic on everything, but I don't want to screw the changes up by trying to update it myself.

[SirGalahad]

Fixed and will do.

The Example Text will have to be added. It's not in there now. Have to get to a meeting in just a copuple minutes, but I'll get to that later tonight.

[IAmBatman]

No worries. Whenever you get a chance. I'm just working with about half a brain right now, so I'm sure something would get lost in translation.