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Old February 22nd, 2008, 09:08 AM
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The end of Vydar

Nilfheim looked over the army at his command. Knights stood at attention in line after line, only broken up by the reinforcements that had just arrived, Alastair MacDirk and his warriors. Looking of into the distance Nilfheim could just barley see the out line of Attica Castle. That was where this army was about to head, and it was where the last assault had failed. Omnicrom snipers and brave knights advanced on the castle yesterday,but were all destroyed even before they could reach the castle by a squad of gladiatrons led by one of Vydar's few remaining Majors, Major X17. X17 had even killed Sir Denrick in that assault,and was posing a daunting task to Nilfheim's army. After no one came back from that battle Nilfheim ordered reinforce ments and got what he needed. Today, with his numbers larger then ever he was going to take that castle,no matter the cost. The great white dragon yelled out the order, "MARCH!" and flew of at the head of his now advancing army.
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Old February 22nd, 2008, 09:17 AM
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Major X17 knew battle was coming again. His eyes were focused on the spot where he heard the roar of a dragon only moments ago, he knew that Jandar's new favorite general,now that his old favorite was dead, would be fighting with his soldiers today. Picking his sword back up, he turned around and sent an electric signal through the gladiatrons in his force. They awoke from sleep mode like zombies, an arm raised up, then another, then the head, then the legs. In erie synchronization the mindless warriors rose as one. They all reached down and grabbed their weapon and then came back up holding their weapon in the same manner. X17 sent out another signal now that the warriors were ready. This signal allowed them free thought. Every single gladiatron changed the positioning of the weapons, started milling around, or looked for the army they were about to fight. X17 saw his army was ready for the slaughter that was to come.
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Old February 22nd, 2008, 09:19 AM
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The canyon stopped up ahead and Nilfheim knew this was where Major X17 was going to make his stand. He ordered two rows of knights to charge ahead. As soon as they reached the end of the canyon, but before they could reach the plain ahead gladiatrons shot out in front of them. The knights stopped short, raised their weapons, and prepared to fight. The gladiatrons moved forward and caught the knights in pincers. Unable to move the knights could not fight well. They stroke out at the gladiatrons, but most they were stabed before their swords went far enough, but for the rest their blades clanged of the gladiatrons armor. Knowing the enemy's fighting style, Nilfheim ordered more knights to advance but this time with Omnicrom snipers backing them up. "FIGHT!FIGHT! JANDAR HAS ORDERED THAT TRATOR VYDAR DEAD! ATTACK IN THE NAME OF YOUR BROTHER SLAIN BY HIS COWARDLY MOVE IN BARRENSPUR!" Knights advanced as well as omnicrom snipers. Gladiatrons were stricken from a range by the snipers and fell. This left the knights room to attack. Blood and oil mixed as the knights gave back what had been taken from them in the first charge. The gladiatrons however would not stop and killed their worth. "It is time for me to join the fray" thought Nilfheim, unaware that Major X17 was having the same thoughts.
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Old February 22nd, 2008, 09:20 AM
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Yay. Story about people dieing and stuff. Hope theres lots of blood from Nilf's side.
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Old February 22nd, 2008, 09:21 AM
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you know it
by the way my favorite generals in order
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Old February 22nd, 2008, 09:23 AM
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How 'bout oil from Vydar's?
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How 'bout oil from Vydar's?
my thought exactly
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Old February 22nd, 2008, 09:53 AM
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Nilf heim remembered the reason why he was fighting against Vydar moments before he joined the battle
Krug backed down, unable to withstand Sgt. Drake Alexander and Agent Carr at the same time. The two of them fought Krug brutally at Barrenspur for only one reason, Krug was an enemy of the Ullar, Vydar, Jandar alliance. They were dedicated to eliminating Utgar, and for that had to defeat such a powerful warrior. Agent Carr's blade kept on being deflected and Sgt. Drake was basically fighting Krug alone. Sgt. Drake was hit hard by a fist from Krug and was sent flying. He hit the ground and rolled over. Agent Carr rushed over to him. "Carr! Kill that beast! Please, forget about me!"
" Don't worry Drake, I'll forget about you,in fact It's my mission."
" What do you mean Carr?" Agent Carr bent down closer and said,
" Vydar has henceforth annulled it's alliance with Jandar" With that he stabbed Sgt. Drake and stood up. He walked over to Krug and explained Vydar's plan to the beast. He then apologized to Krug,and he walked of, being summoned by Vydar in a flash of silver light. Krug then left the battle sight as well.
Kelda had found Drake's nearly dead body on a reconnaissance mission. She immediately stopped and began healing Drake. When he was well enough to travel she brought him back to Jandar's castle. Without waiting for further treatment Drake ran toward Jandar's room. He flung open the door and said "Jandar! Vydar has... betray...ed us! Agent... C-Carr at-tacked m...m...mmm" Blood rushed from Drake's mouth and he fell to the floor. Kelda's temporary healing had not been enough and he died on Jandar's floor. Jandar's fury erupted. He ordered all available troops to attack Vydar. Jandar spoke with Ullar and an agreement was made. Ullar would continue to fight Utgar while Jandar sought revenge for his best general's death.
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Yay. Blood and Oil mixed upon the ground was an awesome description
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Old February 22nd, 2008, 10:51 AM
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Nilfheim clawed out against the gladiatrons. He ripped through them with an incredible ferocity. The gladiatrons could not use their cyber claws on him and had no advantage. Nilfheim shot spears of ice into gladiatron after gladiatron, spraying oil every where. Alistair MacDirk and some of his warriors formed around the great dragon king and fought with an incredible determination. With every gladiatron slashed by Nilfheim, Alastair killed two, moving with superhuman speed. The soulborgs simply could not pin him down fast enough. Alistair's warriors fought hard as well. Every time their clan leader was even scratched they became angrier and fought more intensely. The killing vortex caused by Nilfheim and the MacDirks allowed room for the knights and Omnicroms to advance, and cause even more damage. The oil spilled caused Nilfheim to become black, striking terror into even the robotic soulborgs. Vydar's forces seemed completely over powered and nearly destroyed but that was when Major X17 joined the fray.
Suddenly a colum of knights went down.The gladiatrons had gained momentum and were cutting a swath straight to the Omnicroms. Nilfheim beet his wings, sending soulborgs flying,and took of towards the failing area. As he landed a dozen gladiatrons attacked in unison. Ice flew and claws ripped through them, leaving destruction all around. It was not long before Major X17 showed his face to Nilfheim though. He ran forward slashing through knights on his way to Nilfheim. Before Nilfheim could strike hee jumped high and sliced through Nilfheim's chest. The great dragon bent over, clutching his wound. X17 charged the crippled dragon,preparing for the deathblow, but was cut short. Nilfheim slashed upward with incredible speed, sending the Major flying. Once above him, Nilfheim flew up and slashed X17 back to the ground. Staying in midair, Nilfheim shot a huge spike of ice straight down, cutting Major X17 in two. Nilfheim never missed a beat and continued to fight as if nothing had happened. Soon the gladiatrons were all destroyed. After the battle, the ground was soaked through with oil. The grass all died, and a horrible smell lingered over the place. Blood was almost invisible, as all the black oil pervaded on the ground. Soon Nilfheim's army would fight again but for now they would set camp, care for the wounded, and form a strategy.
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A huge tent was erected for the war council. Inside, chairs lined a mahogany long table. Each chair was a throne, ment for Jandar's best warriors. At the end of the table was a throne larger then all the others. Nilfheim sat in that throne, looking over the rest of the war leaders. " Right are we all here?" he asked, his voice booming around the tent. " I belive so Nilfheim." Sir gilbert answered.
" Good. Now, we must build a strategy for the coming battle. All of Vydar's forces are in that castle. We don't have enough man power to take it."
" Aye, but we have the spirt of the bold!" Shouted Alastair MacDirk. " Numbers don't matter! We will win by our own blood and sweat!" Nilfheim closed his eyes. He thought of how his men would fight to the death, and he was proud of that.
" That is not enough. Strategey wins battles." as the unknown voice came through the curtain a joyful shout came from outside.
" Who is there?" Nilfheim growled to the man outside the door. The curtains parted and in walked a man dressid in armor, but not the armor of the Knights of weston. "Who are you?" asked Sir Dupuis
" The man strolled in and took one of the empty seats. " why are there so many open seats here?" he asked.
" WHO ARE YOU?" Nilfheim roared out.
" Fine. My name is Marcus Decimus Gallus, and I fight for the glory of Einar. I have been sent to add the Roman legion to you cause,"
" And I am Parmenio," said a second man who stepped into the tent, " and my sacred band will folow you." Nilfheim, Alastair, Sir Gilbert, and Sir Dupuis let out a sigh of relife in unison. " Now the armies are even! We will win!"
" My lord dragon," Marcus started, " I have a strategy to use, that is if you will allow it."
" Of course!"
Marcus rubbed his hands together and then became telling his plan, " Right then here is what we have to do..."
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