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Fallen Templars Customs: NEW 6/21 Arrogant Hunter
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Special Thanks for help with wording and card mechanics goes out to: netherspirit, Chaoschild, Necroblade, Kinseth, shakey_snake, reapersaurus, Grungebob, justjohn, Doc Savage, hi1hi1hi1hi1, Hex_Enduction_Hour, brickman1444 Karkadinn Thanks to Annerios for the 6 sider diagram Alright this is where I place the name of finished expansion waves All old customs from HQ and May will be redone graphically Wave 1: Shadows of Hyperion Bios and completed card will be here Kyrie Dwarven Hordes Asgard Mithrilaxe Sick of the rigors of the Brightaxe guard Asgard broke from their ranks and joined the Chums of Chance. His dream of seeing Valhalla is coming true and the Growing Mercenary Organazation gains a powerful ally in the Dwarf Berserker Balzain Brightaxe Dwarf from Valhalla fights for Jandar Bio Balzain's clan lived in Iron Hills mining the fine metals to be used in Great War for the Wellsprings. As they dug deeper and deeper they finally came across something that would change their mines forever, a wellspring. Within days of It's finding Balzain had forged and cooled an axe in the springs water. The Axe had such a sharp edge that if swung hard enough can smash a sheild to splinters. Although the Brightaxe clan supplied metals to both sides of the war effort it did not spare them the wrath of Utgar and was decimated leaving most of it's miners and warriors dead. Although Balzain survived he is still protected by the fallen dwarves spirits. Balzain has sworn vengence on Utgar writing his name in the Book of Grudges . The Brightaxe Guard The Valiant Survivors of Brightaxe mines of the Iron Hills. They have sworn to rush with their warmaster into battle and decimate the enemy. They have sworn to cross out Utgar's name in the Great Book of Grudges in his traitorus blood. Kenaz Stoneheart A Champion Dain Brighthammer who can shake earth Dark Elven Fighters Valsan Dreth Dark Elf, Fights for Utgar Valsan Dreth was the right hand man of Hyperion during his crusade against the Elves. Dreth was freed from an Elven prison by Sindaris Assasins. He was in jail for the murder of group Elven lords during a ceremony. Dreth dispatch them with cold blooded efficiency. He was caught fleeing the scene and was given a death penalty. He was to be thrown into a pit of enraged Dumutef guards. Valsan, as reward for the murder, was given The Armor of Aegis and The Sword of Sel Goth. Each weapon was enhanced by Hyperion himself with magic to turn them into the apex defense armor and a blade which destroys it foes in a fowl swoop. Valsan is known for his almost fanatical devotion to the Dark Elven cause that his mind, even with magic could not change his ideals and destiny Centaurs Council Laurrel Knights and Clerics Sir Ravenburg Grandmaster Traven Morg the Bloodspiller Bio Morg the Bloodspiller was once an master of the Hex on the planet Earth. Morg's hunting of wizards led him to create his own counter magic which allows him to Echo his preys magic spells as well as spells to cause spells to backfire in the users face. The loss of their unique powers allowed Morg to claim his prize. Utgar watching as more wizards and warriors with strange powers are summoned to Valhalla, Utgar invited Morg to join in the Hunt of All time. Vorgath A the black armoured warrior entered the plains of Feylund to fend off a advanced war party of Aubrien's and Ashran. The Archers fired volley after vollley to no effect as the arrows bounced off. Then the Ashran advanced to destroy the menance. Although more agile they were slaughtered by the menace. One stood and she rushed him and pierced his shoulder. The Ashran smirked, she thought she killed him but then an evil laugh erupted from his helmut. He grabbed the Ashran's head tore it clear off. He fears nothing for he is fear incarnate. Death is father, War his mother, Pestilence iis his Sword and Famine his armor and shield. WARLORDS Al Mahktar "The Desert Dog" was once the greatest raiders ever to cross the arabian sands. Al Mahktar raided the many caravans who crossed the desert increasing his vast wealth and killing all who opposed. Yet all who commit crimes are not immune from punishment. Fed up with the loss of his many Caravans a regional Sultan attacked his small band of Raiders. As Mahktar came over the hill he saw the attack take place and only his second in command was still fighting. He rushed to aid and as he did a sandstorm brewed in his wake blinding his attackers and allowing him to save Ali Al Sheik the Desert Hawk at this moment Einar warped both to Valhalla where they raids Einar's enemies ELVES Orion, King in the Wood As the evening of the first Mid Summer's day draws to it's mid point the moon of Feylund hangs over the great forest. The dim beams of light dance on the outline of a cloaked figure. As the beams hit their brightest the figure reveals itself. He is the Consort king of the Forest, the king in the wood. He revently lifts the stag horn to his lips as the his great cloak materializes from the air and the oak ages hands forth it's great spear.He lets loose a pitch that shakes every leaf in the living forest and all inhabitants go silent for they know the Great Hunt has begun. Valantis Lord of the Aubrien Archers on Feylund Umbris Umbris as an adolescent hated the restrictions of the Home Tree and when his time of growth came upon him he took up the path of an Elven infiltrator. These warriors no longer "walk the beaten path" of most elven warrior. These infiltrator face predjudice from those of Home Tree calling them corrupt and ridden with darkness. Due to this fear, infiltrator do not stay long in the Home Tree. Their knowledge of the wilds and wilderness allow them to engage enemy forces in total stealth before the main Elven force strikes. Umbrius was sent to engage a Wolf hunting party. As Umbris picked each one off one by one. A Wolf Captain found out Umbris and through him into a nearby lake. As he felt death grip him at that point he was warped to Valhalla. Umbris now recons for Ullar in the war for the well spring. Valistar Bearers of the Way Antilion Hunting Cadre A dying race from the Planet Feylund. the Antilion would hunt Elves, Wolves, young trolls, and young Doggin on their planet . at the end of the last century the Antilion nest was attacked and destroyed. Although small pockets remain on Feylund they are barely seen and only come to the public eye when a hunter is killed in the deep forest. A small cadre hunters and there pack leader are the personal hunting partners and elite guards of the King of the Wood Gobbie's, Gruts, Ogrons and Trolls Kashak Goblin, Fights for Utgar On the planet Grut goblins are treated with no respect. They are kicked around, made to fix armor, and used as cannon fodder. Yet Kashak was quite different, He was a warlord at the same rank as Orcs such as Grimnak and Tornak. Kashak always fought his hardest when he fought before the orcs under his command. This was no different the day he was charged with destroying a field of orc eating spider. Unfortunately he was swarmed and was almost eaten but Utgar saw some use for the fearful Goblin and warped him to Valhalla Bathazar the Executioner It's said those who walk into the black marsh are caught by Bathazar are zforced to be tortured by his Jurors until Bathazar finish the job at the Choping block. Shades Lord Farside Bio Shade from Earth, Fights for Utgar Selvius Farside was once a normal man of Kyoto until approached by emissaries of the Black Lotus Guild, a elite assassin guild which dealt with those who broke oaths. They offered him a life of Luxuray and training in the way of the Black Lotus. As he donne the Armor of the Fox, his chosen branch style, He became an enigma, no longer man, not quite a ghost. Chase Blacklock Soulborgs The Materials and Services on this this thread are protected by copyright and/or other intellectual property laws and any unauthorized use of the Materials or Services of this Sit thread violate such laws. Except as expressly provided herein, the creator of this Thread does not grant any express or implied right to you under any patents, copyrights, trademarks, or trade secret information with respect to the Materials and Services displayed on or provided by this site. No portion of the information or documents in this thread may be reproduced in any form or by any means without the prior written permission of the the original creator of said material. Last edited by Fallen Templar; June 21st, 2008 at 11:33 PM. |
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Alright Here are the the units up for Critiqing from HQ I've included the bios as well.
Delveguard Elf, Fights for Ullar Delveguard, Warrior of The White Stag, Guardian of the Great Forest as he is known in Feylund rose to prominence after the Burning of the southern most quadrant of The Great Forest. As protector of the forest, Delveguard traveled to the burned quadrant to find the culprits who started the terrible flash fire. Following the trail of burned trees Delveguard came across a burned corpse of a Stag. Delveguard broke off a horn of the stag and crafted a horn out of one of its antlers. Out of respect for the creature and pity for it’s untimely end he blessed its corpse and buried it in a marked grave. After it’s burial Delveguard was visited by The White Stag, Spirit of the Forest, and the spirit gave him it’s blessing. The White Stag’s Blessing gave Delveguard the ability to awaken the trees with a blast of the of his newly crafted horn and to don the armor of the Stag. Upon donning the armor Delveguard saw visions of a war torn world and his calling to help the Forest’s of this realm also. Once again he was visited by the White Stag after a battle with a Dark Elf and his assassins. The Spirit warped him to Valhalla to the halls of General Ullar. Delveguard has thus taken up the fight with General Ullar to defeat the evil which burned his forest and which threatens Forest’s of Valhalla as well. Figure Used THe Horned Hunter Mage Knight set: 2.0 Telandral Human, Fights for Vydar Before the formation of the British Empire there was a greater empire. This empire was Atlantis. Atlantis was the Rome of its time and it fell like it’s ancient counterpart. A rebellion within its conquered lands. Within this separatist movement Telandril was a legend. Telandril was a master inventor and strategist who led her troops into battle. She created innovative weapons such as the Z-6 rotary cannon, which she uses proficiently in battle to kill off advancing Atlanteans squads. Telandril was summoned during the Battle of Orient Point. During the battle Telandril took a small task force to assassinate a leading general named Volkare. Unfortunately her team was caught in a firefight with the Volkare and his personal entourage. Telandril’s team decimated his entourage but the bullets merely bounced off Volkare’s armor. Of the team of five Telandril led, Volkare beat 3 of them dead, crushed the skull of 1 with his bare hands and executed the last one in front Telandril. At this point Telandril had put thousands of rounds into Volkare’s armor. As her impending end was coming as her gun’s crystal powered ammo system died. Telandril pulled out her short sword in a vain attempt to kill the inhuman general. Volkare grabbed her sword arm and flung her off a nearby cliff. As she fell General Vydar, who has intently watched her task force’s conflict with the General and saved her from certain death. She has thus pledged her allegiance to Vydar Red Dutchess of Khasim Mage Knight set: Nexus General Volkare Human, Fights for Utgar Of all the Generals of Atlantis General Volkare is known as the most brutal and relentless. The stories of the unfortunate Freedom Fighters that are captured by Volkare of that of horror, they are subjected to test of mad science, dismembered, decapitated and worse. He has come to the nickname of Volkare The Iron Fisted for his torture and brutal ness. Volkare was summoned to Valhalla during the battle of Anglo-Britannia. During the battle Volkare was leading the main charge against the Freedom Fighters’. The Battle quickly turned to a bloody stalemate leaving both armies destroyed. To settle the battle the leading generals’ Volkare and Vlidon Kratos a leader of the Freedom Fighter met in deadly single combat. During Combat Kratos pierced Volkare’s armor Then to be only disarmed by a mighty swing from Volkare’s sword. But before Kratos was struck down he made his move. Kratos called in an Atlantean strike bomber and bombed the area in which he and Volkare were fighting. Then Utgar made his move. He pulled Volkare to Valhalla to help him further his glory. Volkare serves Utgar with an Iron Fist and a boding hate for Telandril and especially Vlidon Kratos who somehow was spared the death he deserved. General Volkare Mage knight 2.0 The Dwarves of Khazad Dwarves, from Feylund, Fights for Jandar As war rages in the forest’s and plains of Feylund it’s underground has not been kissed by war. Unfortunately the time for peace in the underground is about to end. The men of the mountains have joined the elves against the Drow menace. All dwarves are fierce warriors but some have been blessed with greater ability then their brethren. These Dwarves are the Dwarves of Khazad. Their armor and weapons have all been blessed by the Dwarven Gods. Most Dwarves who have been brought to Valhalla were summoned during the Battle of the Iron Hill. Iron Hill is the gate to the main Dwarven home city and mine. The Drow sent an attack force to “persuade” the dwarves to join their fight to overthrow the Queen. To destroy the threat the Dwarves sent hundreds of Khazad guard to defeat the foes. After the Battle the Drow force was decimated with no survivors. Only reported loss for the Dwarves was 1 squad of Khazad who disappeared after being crushed by a war machine, their bodies were never recovered. Kazad Dwarves LOTR minis |
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I don't have anything more to say about these guys except that that I still like them. If you want any of my suggestions repeated, just ask. Always happy to help with customs. I look foward to more.
Kumiko is not impressed with your sculpt, either.
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Well heres a new unit i just finished. I don't have the bio done i'll upload that later today
Bio Falgorad Elf fights for Ullar During Hyperion’s War, The Queen of Feylund activated her Emissaries of the Word. These were Feylund’s best horsemen. All of the Emissaries rode blessed horses of Telianu Plain. These horses were able to cross-terrain that would stop other warriors and beasts. During the 3rd year Hyperion’s War, Felgorad Would rise to become the most cherished Word Bearer of the Queen and the most feared among her enemies. Felgorad rides the red-eyed horse Shadowmere. The last mission Felgorad would serve his queen on Feylund would come to be known as Hyperion’s Folly. Felgorad was suppose to bring death’s word to Dark Elf officer who leading a squad of assassin’s who were being sent to kill the queen and her family. On Shadowmere Falgorad found his target. During the night while the assassin sang song of joy for being picked for this mission Felgorad attacked he charged the camp and killed off the assassins, all but the officer. Falgorad charged directly at the officer with sword hewn and with quick flash of steel the officer lay dead. But unfortunately Felgorad and his steed were struck down by a final spell by the fallen drow. As Shadowmere lay unconscious and he lay in a pool of blood, General Ullar came to him and saved him and his steed. He now Bears Ullar’s word against the Valkyrie Generals enemies. |
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Consider me your editor. Feel free to copy and paste but, read it first. Just in case I got something wrong.
Ram If Falgorad moves in a straight line for his entire move, he may pass through opponents' figures. One at a time roll the 20-sided die for each figure Falgorad passes through. If you roll a 15 or higher, that figure receives 1 wound and is placed on an adjacent space. The rammed figure does not take any leaving engagement attacks. Never Surrender If Falgorad is unable to move due to a special ability, he may attack one additional time. Personality sp: Valiant 1?. Can Falgorad ram a fig off a cliff? (It would be fun if he could.) If so, you will have to change what I wrote to include that. (... adjacent or lower space.) I like him. Kumiko is not impressed with your sculpt, either.
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The 'treat a squad as heroes' special power on the dwarves is very interesting and unique, but I fear that it may break some basic game mechanics. Many powers specifically only work on heroes for important mechanical reasons, after all....
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Please disregard the ? about ramming off a cliff. I need to change what I suggested for the Ram special ability. Try this instead:
Ram If Falgorad moves in a straight line for his entire move, he may pass through opponents' figures. One at a time roll the 20-sided die for each figure Falgorad passes through. If you roll a 15 or higher, that figure receives 1 wound and is placed on an adjacent space that is lower than the height of the rammed figure. The rammed figure does not take any leaving engagement attacks. I think this takes care of not being able to move the figure up 20 levels but still knock it off a cliff. If you have any questions about my reasoning on this, just ask. Kumiko is not impressed with your sculpt, either.
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Ok I took ChaosChilds advice on Falgorad and changed Delveguard rally the troops here are the updates.
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Heres a new unit the Sindaris Assassin's
BIO Sindaris Assassins All in Feylund fear the Sindari “Rose”. The Roses are specially crafted throwing needles which tips have been dipped in a Toxic mix of the most deadly poisons on the planet. To protect the needles from theft each assassin crafts their own roses’ preventing use by an outsider. Being Dark Elves, the Sindaris Assassins are immune to poison of any kind. Sindaris Assassins work in teams 3 to hunt their targets. Of their most recent kills was that of Crown Prince Falgurd which ignited the War which became known as Hyperion’s War. During the assassination the Sindaris used Fololir’s web to stop the kings movement. The assassin’s rushed forward with Umber knives drawn. As they rushed forward they dodged hundreds of arrows, which were being fired by his Aubrien bodyguards. To clear a path to the target they used the roses to clear away the bodyguard’s. An assassin hopped and slashed the prince’s neck in one flash of steel. There is an odd detail to the murder, even though the Sindari will use any method to kill a target but they prefer to use the rose to kill target, mainly for a thematic effect. It almost seems to be a revenge killing… I having a problem with the sindari rose. should i add another token and should i add a poison effect if they don't get the kill |
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They sound good the way they are. I think one marker is enough and a poison effect would require keeping track of who is poisoned (too much to do).
On Fololir's Web, does each assassin get to choose a fig? Do you get to use this ability even if there are no turn markers on this card? This brings up the question of how you keep track of the webbed figs. Unique squad, not hero. Sindari Rose Special Attack Range 6, Attack 2. This power may be used once per game. Start the game with one rose marker on this card. Remove the rose marker to throw Sindari Roses. One at a time do the following with each Sindaris Assassin: Choose a figure to attack. If the chosen figure receives a wound and is not destroyed by Sindari Rose Special Attack, roll the 20-sided die. If you roll a 17 or higher destroy the chosen figure. Kumiko is not impressed with your sculpt, either.
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Yes its for each assassin. Thats why i had to make them 130 points. I fixed the wording on each power
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