The Book of Cyborg (Justice League)

[japes]

Originally Posted by Arkham

I gave japes the updated ones yesterday. I'm guessing he's currently busy.

Yep, Just got home and saw the message. Cards posted.

[Ronin]

@bsbush7690

I took care of most of the bookkeeping stuff in the OP for you (mini info and linking up the art)


Once you get the bio filled in (either write your own or quote from a wiki - probably with a focus on his history with the JL), you can propose to release him.

[bsbush7690]

Posted a bio. Proposing a vote for Release

@japes @johnny139 @Tornado @TrollBrute @Viegon @Yodaking @Zettian Juggernaut

[Viegon]

"Art by" in the OP needs updated. Otherwise, Yea.

[Lazy Orang]

Originally Posted by bsbush7690

Posted a bio. Proposing a vote for Release

@japes @johnny139 @Tornado @TrollBrute @Viegon @Yodaking @Zettian Juggernaut

Come on guys, a little enthusiasm - he's great!

[japes]

Originally Posted by Lazy Orang

Come on guys, a little enthusiasm - he's great!

Been busy dealing with doctors and stuff lately...

Yea

[Lazy Orang]

Originally Posted by japes

Been busy dealing with doctors and stuff lately...

Yea

Ooh, are you okay? Hope it's nothing serious.

[Tornado]

YEA

Feel better japes.

[Yodaking]

I pre-voted and you can still count it, but here are few more things to look at.

The last line of the bio doesn't read correctly for me and you can remove the () around the bio.

Synergy updates would be nice to have too if any of our experts in that area can help him out. What I generally do on that is just pull up the other Cyborg thread and copy and paste the Cyborg species stuff. Do the same for Scientist, pulling up a scientist like Reed Richards and copying what it there, but change the name to Cyborg when you do. Then take a look at the other 3 JL marker guys to see what they did for the JL marker synergy and copy and model something after those. Since he does have the traditional X heal power that other Cyborg's have, it will need to be slightly reworded here but should model what that says.

[TrollBrute]

The bio has some tense consistency issues and could use a little editing I think:

When Victor Stone's father broke his promise and missed yet another one of his son's games, Victor visited his father's workplace at S.T.A.R. Labs. There, Silas Stone and his fellow scientists were working on the Mother Box that Superman came in contact with after his battle with the Parademon. The Mother Box exploded, destroying most of Victor's body and killing all the scientists except Victor's father. Silas Stone did he could for Victor's survival and used the energies from the Mother Box to give Victor a new form as Cyborg! Cyborg inadvertently absorbed some of the Parademon's components, giving him access to Boom Tube technology. This new ability automatically teleported Victor to where Batman, Green Lantern, Superman, Flash, Wonder Woman, and Aquaman were currently stationed. Together, the newly formed team prevented Darkseid's assault on the Earth and, with the help of Cyborg's Boom Tube, send Darkseid back to Apokolips. Cyborg and the others formed the Justice League and now fight to protect the world from all those who may do it harm.

The bits in blue are slight conjectures on my part, as I'm not entirely certain what happened in the stories. The original sentences weren't clear. Once the bio issues get worked out, Yea from me.

[japes]

Originally Posted by Lazy Orang

Ooh, are you okay? Hope it's nothing serious.

Just something I've been recovering from for the past 4 months. I'll be fine eventually.

[Viegon]

Originally Posted by TrollBrute

The bio has some tense consistency issues and could use a little editing I think:

The bits in blue are slight conjectures on my part, as I'm not entirely certain what happened in the stories. The original sentences weren't clear. Once the bio issues get worked out, Yea from me.

Looks like there's also an "all" missing; I added it in red above.