Fan Fic Contest - Are you the best writer?

[ZAKOVANI]

Hahah thanks.

[Bloody Bogle]

Originally Posted by The Grim Reaper's Friend

Ah, how could I forget about my twelve guys with 23 bazookas a piece!? No idea.
At any rate, after apparently somewhere around eight days of searching , I have found the giant pencils post.

You should have asked me about the giant pencils post. When I won my contest, I read through every single page trying to make sure that my prompt had not been done.

[ZAKOVANI]

That's... Intense.

[Bloody Bogle]

I had a VERY free afternoon.

[Son of Arathorn]

Ah, I remember that prompt well. Many great entries. A single victor in bumper15. And if I recall correctly, a great tale by yours truly!

[Bro-man]

I wondered what happened to Bumper. I haven't seen him on the contest for some time now.

[Son of Arathorn]

Originally Posted by Bro-man

I wondered what happened to Bumper. I haven't seen him on the contest for some time now.

Unfortunately, b15 hasn't been on-site since the end of February. A shame, he was a gifted writer.

[ZBeeblebrox]

Wow, amazing stuff guys...I love this thread.

Thanks for the C3V and SoV love


I am going to keep this in mind when I begin a re-model of the C3V Fiction Department after wave 15 is released. So I may be PMing some of you in the future*



Also if you guys indented some, the posts may read more smoothly.

Indent buttons looks like , just a FYI.

-ZB

[Tornado]

We also threatened Bro-Man with giant pencils last Christmas. This page and the previous one. Now to the judging.

This was really difficult and I enjoyed all of the entries. Thank-you. I went a little unorthodox in the placement but I struggled with this.

3rd place

Spoiler Alert!

ZAKOVANI

Very cool. I liked your description of the summoning pools. It was fun to read about so many different units. It brought life to the battle and deaths of the forces. Though a bit long it held my interest throughout. A grand battle. I did not know Mimring was a chick.

Fav. lines

Many of the stray shots hit their own Orcs… after a while, the friendly units were indistinguishable from the enemy combatants, so the Soulborgs fired indiscriminately into the pack of fighting mobs.

“Go fast, Haduc,” Emirroon said, as he raised his staff to blast a Sahuagin raider that ventured too close. “Go now!”

superfrog

Short and sweet. I like your take on Elaria. Killer Karma. Solid.

How funny, she thought, that we share the same colors, but are entirely different. With a twisted sense of satisfaction, she ground the insect into the dust with her perfect red boot.

TrollBrute

The wonderful dance of the blade dancers. Enchanting. An ancient dirge to honor a fallen foe. Soulful.

Fav. lines

The Varkaanans are a ballet of glory and violence.

The sisters move as one dancer, a whirling, blurring, shining routine, bringing death to all who stand in the way.

The Grim Reaper's Friend

Another engaging well written entry. Great tension between the wolves.

Fav. lines

The female wolf gave a short laugh that rippled with the hints of a growl. “We patrol our lady’s land, keeping it clean of Utgar’s filth.”


Shrinir sat still for a moment or two, and then silently stood with a grace that befitted her beauty. “Wolves do not make promises,” she said, “for they are too easily broken."

2nd Place

Spoiler Alert!

Son of Arathorn

I continue to be a big fan of your writing and you blessed me with a grand tale. A ragtag bunch of soldiers versus hundreds of Zombies. Gripping, gritty, goodness. Amazing dialogue. Thank you.

Fav. lines

“Listen to me you sniveling piece of slime, and listen good. I don’t want you on my squad. Never did. But orders are orders, and just like I’m stuck with you, you’re stuck with me. So shut up, and do as I say. I have no intention of arguing chain of command while stinking corpses feast on us. Got it?”

“Well, I have some words for you, before we go into a battle we likely won’t survive. Firstly and foremostly, have that pistol at the ready. One of these things gets it’s teeth into you, and you’d better put that thing in your mouth. ‘Cause trust me, you do not want to spend the rest of your time on this land as a shambling, mindless corpse that longs to consume the flesh of the living."

Viegon

Completely enjoyed it. It had it all. Elves, Vamps, Magic, stellar dialogue with double digit speakers and even a poem/chant. Very, very cool. You almost ran this one wire to wire.

My favorite parts were

A smile touched his lips. A horrible, cold, merciless smile. A smile that insulted happiness, and one that killed it too.

His laughter rang through the valley over, and over, and over again; more unnerving then a murder of crows, and more chilling then the whisper of a shade.

Dysole

I really enjoyed seeing things through Omegacron's eyes. Brilliant.

Omegacron analyzed the various dots making up a symphony of destruction around him.

This reminded me of my favorite video game.

And the winner is

Spoiler Alert!

Johnny139

Completely awesome. I felt the pain of Priscus.
Blood and Iron indeed. Loved it.

Favorite line:

With satisfaction that could be called cruel, she trained her sidearm and fired in the night.

All right, sorry it took so long. A grand thanks to all contestants. I hope to see you all for future prompts. This was fun and added an extra level of excitement and anticipation of playing the C3V designs again. I want to make the Blade Dancers whirl and blur or battle valiantly with Captain Varan led soldiers against a horde of Zombies...

Almost D-Day.

[Tornado]

Originally Posted by ZBeeblebrox

Wow, amazing stuff guys...I love this thread.

Thanks for the C3V and SoV love


I am going to keep this in mind when I begin a re-model of the C3V Fiction Department after wave 15 is released. So I may be PMing some of you in the future*



Also if you guys indented some, the posts may read more smoothly.

Indent buttons looks like , just a FYI.

-ZB

Thanks ZB. Some grand tales indeed. Thanks for the tip on the indentations, someone was just asking about that. It took me almost a year to figure out the quote button(you just click on it).

And I also miss bumper15. Absolutely loved his stories. I hope he returns. With all the new blood, if enough of the old guard returns, we could have double digit entries soon.

[Bro-man]

I remember that pencil thing as well. LOL!

Any way congrats on the win Johnny! Can't wait for the Prompt.

[Son of Arathorn]

Good calls on the judging Tornado! And congrats to Johnny 139! Masterfully done work by all!