Predator Elder

[Karat]

That works too, but if we aren't spelling out Predator Elder it should be "it" to be consistent.

[japes]

Originally Posted by Karat

That works too, but if we aren't spelling out Predator Elder it should be "it" to be consistent.

If you mean here...then yes that makes sense. It was the out of context It that occured that was bothering me. This is clear what the "it" is.

During setup, choose an enemy Unique or Event Hero to be Predator Elder's Prey. At the end of your turn, if Predator Elder inflicted 1+ wounds on hisit's Prey this turn but his Prey is not defeated, you may activate a Yautja that has not been activated this turn, then your turn ends

[IAmBatman]

You want "its" for the possessive

[Karat]

Yes and yes. I concur. Which gives:

During setup, choose an enemy Unique or Event Hero to be Predator Elder's Prey. At the end of your turn, if Predator Elder inflicted 1+ wounds on its Prey this turn but its Prey is not defeated, you may activate a Yautja that has not been activated this turn, then your turn ends

[Karat]

Originally Posted by Karat

There's a couple more trimmings/rearrangings I can see that we can do.

For pasteability.

Actually, this edit seems clearer yet.

[Splash]

Updated with that last one for now.

[japes]

we've been using enemy in a lot of places no reason to not use it here.

also combining the first two sentences into one, since the second part is what the first part is being chosen for.

other than that I'm good with either what you posted in post #88 or this mod to your #89, which technically is a combo of your two posts...

WORTHY PREY
During setup, choose an enemy Unique or Event Hero to be considered Predator Elder's Prey. At the end of your turn, if Predator Elder's Prey was not defeated and received 1+ wounds from Predator Elder, you may activate a Yautja that has not been activated this turn, then your turn ends.

shorter without losing anything.

[Splash]

Looks good to me, updated

[Karat]

[IAmBatman]

I preferred how it read when it specified that he inflicted the 1+ wounds this turn, but not a huge deal. That version works as well.

[Karat]

That would be an easy add and I would almost bet that was just an ommission by mistake.

[Splash]

Updated OP with this, assuming we should be good now.

WORTHY PREY
During setup, choose an enemy Unique or Event Hero to be considered Predator Elder's Prey. At the end of your turn, if Predator Elder's Prey was not defeated and received 1+ wounds from Predator Elder this turn, you may activate a Yautja that has not been activated this turn, then your turn ends.

@japes