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Old December 22nd, 2010, 10:07 PM
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Nick Fury

Human
Unique Hero
Director
Disciplined

Life: 5
Move: 5
Range: 6
Attack: 3
Defense: 5
Points: 190

Director of Shield:
After attacking with a normal attack, you may choose up to three Agents you control and place them adjacent to Nick Fury. Any Agent moved by Director of SHIELD will (not) take leaving engagement attacks.

TRIGGER FINGER SPECIAL ATTACK
Range 5. Attack 4.
Nick Fury may attack with his Trigger Finger Special Attack before moving. After moving, he may attack one additional time with his Trigger Finger Special Attack.

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Old December 22nd, 2010, 10:56 PM
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Re: Ellak's Comic Customs

Not bad for a first custom. Do you plan on making cards too or just laying out the information.

Anyway for Director of SHIELD:
- Agent is not a personality, it's a class.
- You need to specify who controls the Agents either "any Agents," "any Agents you control," or "friendly Agents"
- You need specify if the moved figures take leaving engagement attacks or not.
- Also "When XX attacks" doesn't tell you when you're supposed to move the figures, it needs to say, before or after. In this case probably after.
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After attacking with a normal attack, you may choose up to three Agents you control and place them adjacent to Nick Fury. Any Agent moved by Director of SHIELD will (not) take leaving engagement attacks.
For Double Gun Special Attack:
- The range and attack values for special attacks don't use colons they use periods.
- I would reword the ability a little bit.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Double Gun Special Attack
Range 5. Attack 4.
After attacking with Double Gun Special Attack, you may move Nick Fury up to four spaces and attack one additional time with this attack.

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Re: Ellak's Comic Customs

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For Double Gun Special Attack:
- The range and attack values for special attacks don't use colons they use periods.
- I would reword the ability a little bit.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Double Gun Special Attack
Range 5. Attack 4.
After attacking with Double Gun Special Attack, you may move Nick Fury up to four spaces and attack one additional time with this attack.
Or how about (to make the power more unique):

TRIGGER FINGER SPECIAL ATTACK
Range 5. Attack 4.
Nick Fury may attack with his Trigger Finger Special Attack before moving. After moving, he may attack one additional time with his Trigger Finger Special Attack.

This adds an interesting flavor to the special attack without making Nick Fury (who should be in his 90's by now, I know, I know Super Serum blah blah blah) run 9(!!!) spaces per turn.

Also, I would rather see Director of S.H.I.E.L.D. work more like this:

MISSION DIRECTIVE
At the end of the round, you may reveal the X Order Marker on this card to move up to 3 agents you control up to 5 spaces each. Figures moved by Mission Directive do not take leaving engagement attacks if they end their move not adjacent to any enemy figures.

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Re: Ellak's Comic Customs

New Custom Up.

White Martian
Protex

Unique Hero
Martian
Soldier
Relentless

Life:5
Move:7
Range:5
Attack:4
Defense:3
Points: 170

Regeneration:
After taking a turn with Protex, you may remove up to 2 wounds from this card

Psi Spikes Special Attack
Range.7 Attack.3

You may attack up to 3 times with Psi Spikes Special Attack


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