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Ellak's Comic Customs
Nick Fury
Human Unique Hero Director Disciplined Life: 5 Move: 5 Range: 6 Attack: 3 Defense: 5 Points: 190 Director of Shield: After attacking with a normal attack, you may choose up to three Agents you control and place them adjacent to Nick Fury. Any Agent moved by Director of SHIELD will (not) take leaving engagement attacks. TRIGGER FINGER SPECIAL ATTACK Range 5. Attack 4. Nick Fury may attack with his Trigger Finger Special Attack before moving. After moving, he may attack one additional time with his Trigger Finger Special Attack. Last edited by ellak96; December 30th, 2010 at 11:50 AM. |
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Re: Ellak's Comic Customs
Not bad for a first custom. Do you plan on making cards too or just laying out the information.
Anyway for Director of SHIELD: - Agent is not a personality, it's a class. - You need to specify who controls the Agents either "any Agents," "any Agents you control," or "friendly Agents" - You need specify if the moved figures take leaving engagement attacks or not. - Also "When XX attacks" doesn't tell you when you're supposed to move the figures, it needs to say, before or after. In this case probably after. Quote:
- The range and attack values for special attacks don't use colons they use periods. - I would reword the ability a little bit. Quote:
Feedback: We could all use a little more |
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Re: Ellak's Comic Customs
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TRIGGER FINGER SPECIAL ATTACK Range 5. Attack 4. Nick Fury may attack with his Trigger Finger Special Attack before moving. After moving, he may attack one additional time with his Trigger Finger Special Attack. This adds an interesting flavor to the special attack without making Nick Fury (who should be in his 90's by now, I know, I know Super Serum blah blah blah) run 9(!!!) spaces per turn. Also, I would rather see Director of S.H.I.E.L.D. work more like this: MISSION DIRECTIVE At the end of the round, you may reveal the X Order Marker on this card to move up to 3 agents you control up to 5 spaces each. Figures moved by Mission Directive do not take leaving engagement attacks if they end their move not adjacent to any enemy figures. |
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Re: Ellak's Comic Customs
New Custom Up.
White Martian Protex Unique Hero Martian Soldier Relentless Life:5 Move:7 Range:5 Attack:4 Defense:3 Points: 170 Regeneration: After taking a turn with Protex, you may remove up to 2 wounds from this card Psi Spikes Special Attack Range.7 Attack.3 You may attack up to 3 times with Psi Spikes Special Attack Flying Super Strength |
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