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#73
October 22nd, 2021, 04:45 AM
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Re: The Book of Shiro Amada (VOTE for On Deck)
The indentation seems off on the bullets. Specifically the text underneath each bullet. (The 5.25 and -5.25 stuff etc.)
Is the wording and capitalization correct in that first power as well? Seems a bit off to have the “and” before the “;” when usually we have that stuff after, and for the first bullet to not be capitalized when the second is, I’m not sure that’s right? Also not sure a bullet approach is necessary. Don’t have time to double check all that but maybe just have someone double check that.  Yea 
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#74
October 22nd, 2021, 10:52 AM
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Re: The Book of Shiro Amada (VOTE for On Deck)
Oh wait, the card also has the old text. Totally spaced on that.
Yeah, I think it makes sense to move the semi-colon before the 'and' and drop the caps on the second bullet. (I like the bulleted approach here since the effects are a bit wordy)
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#75
October 22nd, 2021, 12:21 PM
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Re: The Book of Shiro Amada (VOTE for On Deck)
Oh snap! You're right, I'll fix the text when I get home from work today. Good catch on the bullets, I do prefer the bullet approach for the same reason Ronin was talking about though.
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#76
October 22nd, 2021, 07:40 PM
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Re: The Book of Shiro Amada (VOTE for On Deck)
Cards have been updated.
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#77
October 22nd, 2021, 10:02 PM
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Re: The Book of Shiro Amada (VOTE for On Deck)
Yea
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#79
October 23rd, 2021, 11:16 AM
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Re: The Book of Shiro Amada (VOTE for On Deck)
yea
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#80
October 23rd, 2021, 11:22 AM
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Re: The Book of Shiro Amada (VOTE for On Deck)
Looks great!
Yea
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#81
October 23rd, 2021, 06:44 PM
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Re: The Book of Shiro Amada (VOTE for On Deck)
This passes! #1302
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#82
March 17th, 2022, 06:37 PM
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Re: The Book of Shiro Amada
I would like to propose a name change and a slight mechanical change here.
Between conversations in the Gundam thread and Discord. It was brought up that this name just didn't give the warm and fuzzies like "Disarming Offense" does, (also it's punny). As for the mechanical change, once I have the RX-79 [G] Gundam started, I'll be able to do some testing with him. It shouldn't make too much of a difference aside from allowing him to use the power in the Ground Gundam (coming soon) as well as Ez8. Quote:
@fret_gurglo @Lord Pyre @LordVenoc @MrNobody @tcglkn
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#83
March 17th, 2022, 06:59 PM
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Re: The Book of Shiro Amada
Yea, assuming the wording is good!
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#84
March 17th, 2022, 07:41 PM
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Re: The Book of Shiro Amada
Yeah, the wording may need a looking at.
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