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Old September 21st, 2014, 10:47 PM
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Re: Bloodlines

Sorry this chapter took so long. I was busy with school and I needed to catch up. Editing and proofreading is done by TGRF, who does a fantastic job. Anyway, here is the new chapter and in here we get to learn what Rain is really planning.

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Re: Bloodlines

M. Night Shyamalan voice: "What a twist!"

Good chapter. Too bad we'll never know about those vampires/wolf assassins until next time(s).

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Old September 22nd, 2014, 12:06 AM
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Re: Bloodlines

Obviously Rain has some devious plan at work here, but...
If she really wanted Khosumet killed, surely she could navigate him into such a position so that he would be? Unless she is purposefully siding with Jandar for some other reason... like maybe an assassination... hmm...
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Obviously Rain has some devious plan at work here, but...
If she really wanted Khosumet killed, surely she could navigate him into such a position so that he would be? Unless she is purposefully siding with Jandar for some other reason... like maybe an assassination... hmm...
~TGRF.
Admittedly, holding hostages of your wannabe ally in order to join him is a pretty dumb plan, especially when you could just request an audience... :/

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Old October 12th, 2014, 11:13 PM
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Old October 13th, 2014, 01:33 AM
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Re: Bloodlines

Sorry, the wait was primarily my fault.

Okay so I'm confused. First Rain asks Jandar to kill her father, and now she's going on a three month long vacation? Something's definitely up here.

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Sorry, the wait was primarily my fault.

Okay so I'm confused. First Rain asks Jandar to kill her father, and now she's going on a three month long vacation? Something's definitely up here.

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Re: Bloodlines

Acurses! Vampires were mentioned--perhaps I was wrong after all...

Anyway, I'm pretty sure that Rain is gonna be evil anyway since that's the attribute that just seems to exude from her whilst all we've gotten from Khosumet thus far is warm fluttery happy father feelings. But only time (and Bro-Man) will tell.

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Acurses! Vampires were mentioned--perhaps I was wrong after all...

Anyway, I'm pretty sure that Rain is gonna be evil anyway since that's the attribute that just seems to exude from her whilst all we've gotten from Khosumet thus far is warm fluttery happy father feelings. But only time (and Bro-Man) will tell.
Khosumet and warm fluttery happy father feelings... never thought I'd see those in the same sentence...
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Re: Bloodlines

I've been reading these this past week and have gotten myself caught up with the story. Rain sure is a peculiar character. I'm interested for chapter 9.

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Old October 16th, 2014, 04:44 PM
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I've been reading these this past week and haven't gotten myself caught up with the story. Rain sure is a peculiar character. I'm interested for chapter 9.
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I've been reading these this past week and haven't gotten myself caught up with the story. Rain sure is a peculiar character. I'm interested for chapter 9.
You mean have, perhaps?
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