The Opposition: Custom Anti-Kyrie Army

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Seidh paced to and fro, preparing himself for the massive undertaking. For several months Seidh has spent countless hours composing strategies for using his corpse-puppets to ensnare the free world of Valhalla under the craft of the Volvakyrie. The Svartrune began to vibrate, as Seidh's unnatural mentor began to materialize.

"The worst has been brought upon us. Utgar's recklessness has brought forth an abomination of Urorcraft. His name is Valkrill. This creation of bloodlust and treacherous magic has guaranteed the Valkyrie's damnation. Make haste sorcerer, the bowels of the Underworld scream for these Valkyrie's souls."
The Actuator paused.

"I give you another gift. Here is my prized possession, a warcraft known as Harvester. This tool will grant you temporal invulerability, and the gift of opening the Underworld's gates on the battlefield."

"Do not waste anytime, besiege these hellions and secure my stolen souls!"

The Actuator faded with a howling of the forsaken.

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Sable Soul
Revenant
Unique Hero
Mercenary
Cunning
Medium 5

Attack: 3
Defense: 5
Range: 5
Move: 6
120 Points

Psychometrism:
For every wound that Sable Soul inflicts on an opponent, remove a wound off this Army Card and take another turn with Sable Soul. You make only take up to 3 wound markers off for a maximum of 3 turns.

Gift of the Forsaken:
After you take a turn with Sable Soul, roll the 20 sided die. If you roll a 15 or higher, reveal one order marker on any of your opponent's Army Card. If Sable Soul attacks that unit in the same round, add 1 to his attack die.

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This idea might be resurrected in the following novel for my Heroscape Online Novel Series. However, this will have to be created as a separate series, because the Chaoskampf series is designed to be written about the Heroscape planets, and each novel in succession will narrate a new planet.

Now I ask the community. Any comments, concerns, suggestions about this storyline? Is it cohesive, thematic, makes sense? I want to make sure that this will become a successful storyline that will add a new flavor to the Heroscape storyline.