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Re: The Curse of Feylund
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Quick note:
Avoid parenthesis whenever possible. It's a great tool when writing an essay or an email but can through readers off a fiction.
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At Chapter 14. Very good story. Just when you thought it was all right, someone made it alright. Good trades with - Porkins / xraine69 / mac122 (x2) / frylock / Ztimster (x2) and probably others I forgotten to mention...sorry. Last edited by AMIS; April 15th, 2022 at 07:09 AM. Reason: Flying through this...must've caught me. |
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That is of course irrelevant if they throw readers off. I myself do not mind them when reading, but if they're something which can throw readers then it might be good practice to avoid them. I'll look into public sentiment on them. ~TGRF. |
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Also let me apologize for disappearing for a couple of days...my computer blew up...it's all good now. Just when you thought it was all right, someone made it alright. Good trades with - Porkins / xraine69 / mac122 (x2) / frylock / Ztimster (x2) and probably others I forgotten to mention...sorry. Last edited by AMIS; April 17th, 2022 at 07:50 AM. Reason: I hate technology...and it hates me. |
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Well paced. I only slowed a couple of times, and once was a major technical issue nothing to do with the story.
Chapter 20 seemed to be a let’s get this thing wrapped up chapter instead of a continuation of the story which was a little disappointing but all in all a really good read. I would say 7 of 10.
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Just when you thought it was all right, someone made it alright. Good trades with - Porkins / xraine69 / mac122 (x2) / frylock / Ztimster (x2) and probably others I forgotten to mention...sorry. Last edited by AMIS; April 17th, 2022 at 09:00 AM. Reason: Good Story |
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I am looking forward to the sequel. Will have to re-read Dilmir. Just when you thought it was all right, someone made it alright. Good trades with - Porkins / xraine69 / mac122 (x2) / frylock / Ztimster (x2) and probably others I forgotten to mention...sorry. Last edited by AMIS; April 18th, 2022 at 04:19 PM. Reason: AMIS is waiting for artwork before new work published. |
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