Battles of Valhalla

[Bro-man]

This will be change so that people will know which page is which and so that they can choose which story they wish to read, or that interests them.

Page 1-9, Is Waking Dawn: Carr and his forces are handling a Castle which is being attacked day and night by horde's of zombies. Allies are coming but how long will they hold out through the advancing dead?

Page 9-29, A Hero Stands tall: Telling of how Sgt. Drake Alexander first came to be. How he copes with being in Valhalla for the first time and how he learns to become a better leader.

Bloodlines Is a new story that I am telling. Click the link and find out the bloodline of the Darklord Khosumet.

This will be added every time I post a new story so be preapred to enjoy each and every story.

The Battle of all time awaits, my friends!

[gorthan313]

I would like to see Story Number Two posted.

[Shermif]

I'd like to see #2 as well.

[Bro-man]

Are you sure because even though the others stories look good I'm still thinking on one or the other, but if you want I'll type in that story if you want.

But for now I will wait for more replies.

[Scapemaster]

Hmm, if your more lenient to the other two, why'd you post the second one?

Anyway, I really like to see #3 getting told.

[Bro-man]

I don't really mind which story goes in. I want to do them all.
But it's the viewers choice to pick.

[The fourth Tagawa]

I vote #3.

[Claws of Death]

I think you should do #2.

[Bro-man]

Thanks for the votes guys. I will be looking forward to telling the story. But for now, I will wait for a few days and a few more votes until the time is right to choose which one to tell.

[Bro-man]

Thanks for the votes and tomorow I will tell the second story, "Waking Dawn". I am excited to tell it and I can't wait for you to hear it.

I hope another time that you will be able to listen to the other stories some day.

[Bro-man]

Ok I hope you enjoy this story for all of you.

Waking Dawn, Prolouge:

Agent Carr was standing on top of wall staring at the mountain that was so far off in the distants. The sun is barely rising over the mountain and its barely pouring in its radient light onto the castle and onto the battlefield.

The lands of Vydar were always so breathtaking that no one would ever think of misjudging him and the beauty of his own lands. But ever since the war from Utgars domain, spreading over Vydar's land. Now the once great and fertile land of Vydar is now war torn and a desolate place. Vydar was the first to be strucked from Utgar's armies. His army had to be split in two in order to keep him at bay. One half of his army was trying deperatly to fight back and trying to get rid of the Dam that blocked the river to his land. His other half of the army was in a castle that was a key postion for him, because many mountains were surronding it and it held a valuable water supply towards his army and for his people. If it was taken then his army would brake asunder and his people that he loves would die under utgar's armies.

When the sun came over the mountain its light shined on the battlefield. In front of the castle there were many bodies littered around the castle and on the fields. The bodies were of the soulbourgs and over hundreds of zombies from the last nights attack. Each day and night the zombies come in greater numbers everyday.

Inside the castle, agents and soulbourgs barely start to get up and await their orders. One of them is a soulbourg who is much bigger then the rest, on his shoulder its says his name. Major X17. He gets up with the rest of his soulbourgs and he tells where they should postion themselves for the next upcoming attack. He orders a few of them in front of the gate and they went there without question.

As the day gone by and Agent Carr still staring out onto the battlements, he wondered if his army will survive the next attack. Suddenly he heard footsteps and when he turned his head he saw it was one of his friends, he was relived it was only James Murphy because he had his pistol halfway out of its holster. James Murphy greeted him and asked, " So nothing new so far If they are coming?" "No not yet and I hope not." Carr replied. James murphy knew what was up, "I know what your thinking and everyone is a little on edge from last nights attack." Carr looked onto the battlements and murphy went by his side. Carr said softly, "Its been nearly two weeks since we sent our messenger to vydar to get reinforcments and to resupply us." "Lets just hope that he made it safely and he can get help for us." Murphy said back. Carr nodded and then he heard men coming up on the wall and he greeted his fellow agents.

The ten gladatrons and blastrons who were gaurding the gate below were talking to each other for a long while and is seems that the zombies are not coming. But suddenly one Gladatron stopped and told the others to be quiet. The others became quiet and he walked forward towards the sound of the noise that he heard. The others got their guns and weapons at the ready. The soulbourg walks up toward the remains of one of the zombies. He then stabbed the dead zombie through the chest, to make sure the zombie was dead he stomped on its head with its metal foot crushing the skull. He then turned and waved his metal hand to the others that every thing was fine. But he was mistaken. Suddenly four zombies jumped out of the mounds of bodies and jumped on top of the soulbourg.

Carr heard a tremdous scream from below. He looked down below at the soulbourg and he was struggling around with four zombies on top of him, and soon the zombies killed him and were coming towards the others at the gate. Carr then yelled, " We are under attack, prepare for battle!"
The others inside heard it and they got there weapons and opened the gate and they headed outside. More zombies hiding under the dead bodies came up and were charging at them and the battle commenced.

I hoped that you guys enjoyed it. (Sorry for the bit of gory parts) but I hoped that you liked the story so far. Can't wait to type in the next chapter.

[Scapemaster]

Just a note, you should read it over twice before posting to make sure it sounds right and/or everythings in the right tense, form, etc.

Other than that, great start.