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Custom Units & Army Cards Fan-created HS army cards for units, glyphs, and equipment |
View Poll Results: Would you play AND/OR allow this custom? | |||
Yes-I would play AND/OR allow this custom | 17 | 89.47% | |
No-Underpowered | 0 | 0% | |
No-Overpowered | 1 | 5.26% | |
No-Other Reason | 1 | 5.26% | |
Voters: 19. You may not vote on this poll |
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Barracks Voting & Discussion:Al Mahktar. Voting Closed
Fallen Templar's Al Mahktar:
Figure used: Valenar Nomad Charger, Rare from D&D Miniatures Blood War expansion. You can find discussion of Al Mahktar, as well as the rest of Fallen Templar's work here. Voting Started! Voting Ends 11/29. Anyone can nominate a custom for the Barracks here. smallboxgames.com |
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Here are my concerns as stated in FT's Creator of the Week thread.
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Kumiko is not impressed with your sculpt, either.
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The wording of the second power is awkward, both on the card and, unfortunately, in Chaos Child's revision. Chaos is on the right track, but it still needs work. I'm not sure how the Merciless power can really be elegant.....that's a hard fix.
I like the idea of it and the theme, but that power is going to be a real wording and rules bear I think. The first power just needs a little touch-up in wording...Chaos is on the right track with that. At present, I would vote no. If it is possible to word this card in a clean and elegant manner, I would heartily vote yes. |
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I still think the same as in the creator of the week thread...
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Totally agree with ChaosChild's revisionary suggestions.
Also, I think the +4 move is a bit much... it lets him snag early powerful glyphs, like, say, the summoning one, before almost anyone can react. I don't think there's any official units that can match that kind of speed without Frenzying. I know he's 170 for a reason, but I'd feel better about him if the bonus was cut to +1 or +2 and his point cost shaved a teensy bit to compensate. Finally, I think fearless is kind of a redundant personality type. Relentless means very nearly the same thing, and would enable synergy with official units. If you don't like that, there's also Ferocious and Wild. I'm not opposed to new personality types when they're needed, but in this case it just doesn't seem too necessary. Professional fiction Fanfiction To Ne-Gok-Sa Like dating women Statistics doom your players Till they get lucky |
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Hi1's later suggestions are pretty good.
I agree that +4 move might be too high, like KArk says. Perhaps just take it down one notch to +3, or all the way down to +2. |
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Merciless as the desert, the way it is worded, what is preventing anyone from simply circling a figure and inflicting lots of wounds on a target hero? Perhaps use the word disengaged instead of passed? Also, minor typo with spacing in the wording. It is limited to small and medium. For 170 points and his current stats, I can live with the 11 movement since it is not compatible with the merciless as the desert ability. Overall I would vote yes with minor corrections.
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Most Recent update Taelord uploaded an earlier version
Hope this clears up any problems. "The fact is that a man who wants to act virtuously in every way necessarily comes to grief among so many who are not virtuous."- Niccolo Machiavelli |
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What is actually happening with Merciless as the Desert? Is he kicking up a sandstorm which is damaging the targets? Or is he just attacking them as he rides past?
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Still has a timing issue with Speed of a Sandstorm. You are adding to his movement after his movement phase is over. I removed the word "additional" from my previous wording because it was doing the same thing. If you do use this, be sure to take the last line of Merciless as the Desert out.
Speed of a Sandstorm If Al Mahktar did not use Merciless as the Desert or attack this turn, he may move 4 spaces. Kumiko is not impressed with your sculpt, either.
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