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Old December 5th, 2010, 05:28 PM
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Grey

Be warned, as like my previous story, Underground, this has nothing to do with Heroscape. That being said, enjoy my nwest story, Grey.

PREFACE

NAME: Grey
PASSWORD: **********
CHECKING PASSWORD……………………………………..
Welcome, Grey. Your new mission has just come in.
From: Black
SUBJECT: RE: The Plan
MESSAGE: Alright, Grey, listen up, cuz this is important. The culprit is a respected scientist, Dr. Wolfsberg, who the rest of the world has called a hero. He has discovered a way to clone humans with perfect replicas. A scientific breakthrough? HA! It’s not a clone, it’s a counterfeit human! It’s playing God, tampering with nature, and we have to end it.
Dr. Wolfsberg is making a public appearance in Hamburg, tonight, at a public hall in the city center. Since you’re already in Germany, why don’t you take care of him? Such blasphemy cannot be allowed to continue.
Good luck.
n Black

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"How does it smell?"
'Terrible.'
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Old December 5th, 2010, 10:18 PM
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Comments are appreciated, you know.

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Old December 6th, 2010, 10:40 AM
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Please comment. My writing isn't that bad......

is it?

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Old December 6th, 2010, 10:17 PM
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Comments? Pretty please?

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Old December 6th, 2010, 10:40 PM
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Cool. New chapter soon?

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Old December 6th, 2010, 11:14 PM
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Cool. New chapter soon?
Finally, feedback! Praise the heavens!

New chapter tomorrow.

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Old December 7th, 2010, 07:37 PM
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Coolio. Can't wait to read more!

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Old December 7th, 2010, 07:41 PM
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Chapter 1

Grey sighed as he stared at the message on his computer screen. He was, indeed, stationed in Hamburg, Germany for an entirely different mission. But whatever Black would say, would go, so Grey typed out a response and sent it back to Black. He closed the laptop screen and quietly got into his car.
***
Grey had been released from prison; jailed because of previous assassinations and other felonies three years previously; he was a top-notch hit man and had taken many public officials down before his imprisonment a long time before. He was young and quick then… his age creaked in his bones now, and the assassin began to doubt himself, believe himself to be all too fallible.
Soon enough, the car pulled up to the city hall. People swarmed inside and out, and Grey walked in, dressed like a journalist. He held a camera tight in his hand, the key to his success for this mission. It was no ordinary camera. It was a camera gun.
The barrel of the camera was tiny, only a quarter of an inch, and one bullet it held. If the camera shutter snapped to take a picture, the bullet would fly out, shatter the lens, and hit whatever the camera was aimed at. One tiny miscalculation and the weapon was useless and cover was blown.





That, my friends, is the first Chapter. You know me. Feedback = new Chapter.

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Old December 7th, 2010, 07:50 PM
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Love the Camera gun. Very small chapter, but I like the effects. Especially the codenames. I call Agent Magenta when he comes out.

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Love the Camera gun. Very small chapter, but I like the effects. Especially the codenames. I call Agent Magenta when he comes out.
Yeah, I'm not gonna spen hours writing Chapters like I did in Underground. The story itself will be aout the same length, but in smaller snippets of Chapters.

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Re: Grey

Hm, I think I like this rapid fire idea.

Agent Gray is sweet! I keep thinking Evil Agent Bond.
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CHAPTER 2

Dr. Wolfsberg sat in his plane, idly fingering through a magazine. The stewardess approached him, offering him trivial snacks and drinks, but he impatiently refused. He was already behind-schedule for his speech in Hamburg.

Wolfsberg was a native to Germany, born in Berlin. He was a celebrated scientist, beloved by the world. He had no idea that any would find his work to be... well, evil.

The human clone, a man, a replica of Wolsberg himself, sat next to the doctor. The clone's name was Kyn, and everything about him, from his voice to his looks to his body language was identical to that of Dr. Wolfsberg's. He would go on-stage before the doctor to say a few words, to help prove the miracles of modern science.

The plane tore through the wintry night air. The pilot's voice said in German, "Wir landen in fünf Minuten. Bitte Faten Ihre Sicherheitsgurte." "We will be landing in five minutes. Please fasten your seat belts."

Dr. Wolfsberg closed his eyes and took out his briefcase and papers. He had a speech to deliver. And nothing, in his mind, could stop him.







So that is Chapter Two! Anyone who can name the Underground reference is awesome! I will post one new reference to my previous story each new Chapter. Try to find them all, and remember:

Feedback = New Chapter

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