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Old August 15th, 2008, 10:54 PM
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Valhalla's Second World

I will try to get the first chapter out tomorrow/ Sunday.

Summary:
Zetacron has been captured by Utgar's troops and is being held in a fortress on the Thaelenk Tundra. When a rescue mission goes awry Agent Carr, Syvarris, a member of the Einar Imperium named Drevick and Sargeant Drake get trapped in the dungeon with him. Ruinning from an angry troll, they flee into a hole in the wall that opens into a huge tunnel. When the group finds a whole network of these tunnels that must have taken years to build and a huge squad of marro drones lead by Brunak and Kee-Mo-Shi they know something is terribly wrong. Other problems arrise when they become hoplessly lost in the maze. All this leads up to one of the four uninted generals betraying the others. Who will it be and what are they cooking up with Utgar?

Does this sound interesting to read? Tell me what you think. Thanks!

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Old August 18th, 2008, 12:56 PM
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Re: Valhalla's Second World

Sounds like it could be pretty interesting, but I don't think I would call a network of tunnels "Valhalla's Second World".

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Old August 20th, 2008, 10:05 PM
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Alright, thanks. Is that a new sig Jandarforever?

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Old August 20th, 2008, 10:52 PM
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Alright, thanks. Is that a new sig Jandarforever?
No, just a line from one of my all time favorite TV characters. (And a warning to whoever want's to go against the 4th Mass.)

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Old August 22nd, 2008, 05:26 PM
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Re: Valhalla's Second World

kinda' interesting *scratches chin*

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Old August 22nd, 2008, 10:16 PM
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Re: Valhalla's Second World

Actually I was talking about the 4th Mass part, but oh well.

I've pretty much given up hope on this post since only 2 people responded, but thanks.

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I've pretty much given up hope on this post since only 2 people responded, but thanks.
Don't feel so bad. I put in a story a couple of days ago and not one person has commented about it.
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