Nightwing's Custom Creations - Kilowog, Waverider

[Nightwing]

Here is my very first attempt at a Super Hero Card.

Firestorm

Kilowog

Mister Miracle

Nightwing

Waverider

[hi1hi1hi1hi1]

It's good, I don't know much about Mister Miracle but it seems like an accurate representation of what he can do. One thing you should add though is the word "may" in the Mother Box ability. "After moving and instead of attacking, you may roll the 20-sided die..." Otherwise without the "may" you would have to roll everytime instead of attacking, so you could never make a normal attack.

[Nightwing]

Originally Posted by hi1hi1hi1hi1

It's good, I don't know much about Mister Miracle but it seems like an accurate representation of what he can do. One thing you should add though is the word "may" in the Mother Box ability. "After moving and instead of attacking, you may roll the 20-sided die..." Otherwise without the "may" you would have to roll everytime instead of attacking, so you could never make a normal attack.

Ah, ok....I didn't even think of anything like that.

Thanks

[Jonathan]

I think he's cool! 200 seems like it might be good, might not - it's hard to tell with such a versatile character who is so randomly versatile.

How does he test out?

[Nightwing]

Originally Posted by Jonathan

I think he's cool! 200 seems like it might be good, might not - it's hard to tell with such a versatile character who is so randomly versatile.

How does he test out?

I'll let you know, I just created him yesterday so I haven't had a chance to use him.

[Nightwing]

Made some changes to Mister Miracle.

[IAmBatman]

Re: Nightwing

You might want to consider looking at the stickied TNT Index and clicking on the link for my TNT'd Batman. The wording for Batline works much better on that card, IMO. I just haven't updated it on my other cards yet (for many reasons).
For Razor Wing Special Attack, I would change that last line to just "You may use Nightwing's Razor Wing Special Attack the same or different targets."
I guess it's a flavor call, but Nightwing is also a trained martial artist, so I guess I don't see much point in calling it Acrobatic Counterstrike instead of just Counterstrike since it's the same power. If you were going to go with Acrobatic Counterstrike, I'd like to see something that involves movement a bit more, kind of like the Ninjas of the Northern Wind Disappear power combined with counterstrike.
Born Leader sounds like a cool power.
Left Box stuff looks good. Not sure about his price - he might be a bit undercosted, but price is the hardest part of all of this (other threads should show how widespread that thought is).
You also need to give him a hitzone picture on the right side there. I recommend going to www.heroclix.com and finding the figure gallery for the DC clix figures to get a photo of the Nightwing figure you can doctor. The Heroclix figure of Nightwing is also a good one to get for actual play purposes.

[Nightwing]

Originally Posted by IAmBatman

Re: Nightwing

You might want to consider looking at the stickied TNT Index and clicking on the link for my TNT'd Batman. The wording for Batline works much better on that card, IMO. I just haven't updated it on my other cards yet (for many reasons).
For Razor Wing Special Attack, I would change that last line to just "You may use Nightwing's Razor Wing Special Attack the same or different targets."
I guess it's a flavor call, but Nightwing is also a trained martial artist, so I guess I don't see much point in calling it Acrobatic Counterstrike instead of just Counterstrike since it's the same power. If you were going to go with Acrobatic Counterstrike, I'd like to see something that involves movement a bit more, kind of like the Ninjas of the Northern Wind Disappear power combined with counterstrike.
Born Leader sounds like a cool power.
Left Box stuff looks good. Not sure about his price - he might be a bit undercosted, but price is the hardest part of all of this (other threads should show how widespread that thought is).
You also need to give him a hitzone picture on the right side there. I recommend going to www.heroclix.com and finding the figure gallery for the DC clix figures to get a photo of the Nightwing figure you can doctor. The Heroclix figure of Nightwing is also a good one to get for actual play purposes.

Ok, thanks for the input. I'll make those changes tomorrow when I get to work..

[allskulls]

Welcome aboard, Nightwing!

IAmBatman and Nightwing sharing cards...It's so cute.

[Nightwing]

Originally Posted by allskulls

Welcome aboard, Nightwing!

IAmBatman and Nightwing sharing cards...It's so cute.

Thanks, glad to be here.

Hopefully any cards I make can live up to the standards of this forum and it's awesome designers.

[Nightwing]

Made the changes to Nightwing you suggested IAMBATMAN, only thing is I haven't got those hit location pictures quite down yet so it's still blank for the time being.

[Nightwing]

Added Firestorm!

I think I may have undercosted him?