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Custom Units & Army Cards Fan-created HS army cards for units, glyphs, and equipment |
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Re: Help With Wurdz
Soundwarp, I love that series and I'm touched you are asking me to help. Also, I wish more people working on their own customs used that philosophy when writing.
Let's see: Dream WeaverWelcome to Nightvale. I love this custom! As a mechanical thing, you may wish to rewrite Dream Shaper to trigger after revealing an order marker on an Army Card you control: "For the entire game, after revealing a numbered Order Marker on an Army Card in your army, instead of taking a turn with that Army Card, you may choose . . ." Something like that. Slightly less abusive to the basic elements of the structure of a round. It creates a different question, which is what happens when the OM is on something that's dead, but you can house-rule that how you want. You may also wish to capitalize "Dream Marker." It's probably what I would do, but it's optional. Thanks for sharing! |
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Re: Help With Wurdz
Hey, D_S, before I submit officially, any errors or better ways to word this one?
Spoiler Alert!
Thanks, ~TAF TAF was the Storyteller... in THE ENEMY'S LAST RETREAT |
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Re: Help With Wurdz
I would rewrite "Whichever die has the highest roll counts." Maybe something like: "Use whichever roll is the greater number and discard the other." Or something like that.
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#184
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Re: Help With Wurdz
Why not just "You may use either result"?
~Aldin, trying to avoid pedantic stuff that happens when both dice have the same result He either fears his fate too much or his desserts are small That dares not put it to the touch to gain or lose it all ~James Graham |
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Re: Help With Wurdz
I thought about suggesting that, but I didn't want to interfere with the contemplated design.
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Re: Help With Wurdz
How's this?
~TAF TAF was the Storyteller... in THE ENEMY'S LAST RETREAT Last edited by TheAverageFan; April 22nd, 2015 at 02:38 PM. |
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Re: Help With Wurdz
"You may use the result from either die."
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Re: Help With Wurdz
Fixed; thanks.
~TAF TAF was the Storyteller... in THE ENEMY'S LAST RETREAT |
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I see the SoV caught a different thing.
All I check for is English usage issues. As it says in the OP, I do not check for consistency with other cards or with the rules. |
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Re: Help With Wurdz
Hey DS! I've been brainstorming some powers lately and was wondering if you'd mind helping with one of them. What I have is:
Quote:
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Maps | Customs | Battle Reports 10 Points Under Videos "I'll save myself some time and say I pretty much 100% agree with Bigga" ~Flash_19 |
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Re: Help With Wurdz
It depends. If it's for your own use, it's easy:
Before taking a turn with Chisak, for each wound marker on this Army Card, you may add 1 to Chisak's Attack or Move Value. That's pretty much what you have. Plainly it does not stack. The Stingers don't stack; the Anubians don't stack. I don't think either of those cards says "this turn." You *can* make it more wordy, and if you nominate this to the SoV and it goes through the process, the C3V Editors almost certainly will make it more wordy. But I don't think that's necessary, and if this is not intended for that audience, I wouldn't make it needlessly complicated. I really like this power, BBF. Thanks for sharing! |
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Re: Help With Wurdz
Hey
@Dad_Scaper
I just got back into custom-making and was wondering if you could give me some ideas/edits. Here's what I got: I'm really not good with pricing at all, that's one of my main concerns. Thanks! ~NS |
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