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Old September 17th, 2019, 05:45 AM
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Re: Dilmir: A Tale of Feylund

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Old September 17th, 2019, 05:47 AM
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Re: Dilmir: A Tale of Feylund

Sorry for the silence! As I'm sure you'll see from other posts earth (and azeroth) has kept me away from Valhalla...

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Old September 17th, 2019, 11:15 PM
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Sorry for the silence! As I'm sure you'll see from other posts earth (and azeroth) has kept me away from Valhalla...
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So, about this... It seems that I need input to keep me interested in posting. Which is really messed up, considering that TAF was able to plow through an entire fan fiction with basically zero comments.



Passing over that though, is there interest in me continuing this? I kind of assumed there wasn't when I forgot to post for a few days and no one complained.



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Sorry for the silence! As I'm sure you'll see from other posts earth (and azeroth) has kept me away from Valhalla...
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Old September 17th, 2019, 11:28 PM
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Re: Dilmir: A Tale of Feylund

Yes there is interest!

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So, about this... It seems that I need input to keep me interested in posting. Which is really messed up, considering that TAF was able to plow through an entire fan fiction with basically zero comments.
No comments =/= inactivity. Apparently TMHW and Book of TheAverageFan are very popular with Guests.

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Old September 18th, 2019, 03:35 PM
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Re: Dilmir: A Tale of Feylund

On with the chapters then.

If you follow the 3-act structure, there's a point half way through a story (referred to as the midpoint). The midpoint is usually a big twist, or a turning point, where things change. It's usually what everything before it has been building up to, and everything after it is irrevocably changed, as the protagonist races towards the climax, unable to stop their approaching doom.

The 3-act structure was never something I used until very recently. Despite this, Dilmir has that midpoint, the moment which changes everything. And it's in this chapter.

I give you: Chapter Twelve - A Red Sun

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Old September 18th, 2019, 06:29 PM
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Re: Dilmir: A Tale of Feylund

Apparently I hadn't yet subscribed. A fatal oversight on my part!

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Re: Dilmir: A Tale of Feylund

Chapter Thirteen - Are You? is now live.



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Old September 20th, 2019, 01:23 PM
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Re: Dilmir: A Tale of Feylund

Chapter Fourteen - The Chill of a Cell is now live! Also, because chapter 14 is very short, I've also posted Chapter Fifteen - Banishment. No longer able to hide it, the mystery surrounding Dilmir finally is revealed.



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Re: Dilmir: A Tale of Feylund

Chapter Sixteen - Bloodline is now live! I will also be releasing the glossary along with the next chapter, most likely tomorrow.



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Re: Dilmir: A Tale of Feylund

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