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Re: Horizon in Sight: Dan's Tale
I'm caught up to Ch.6 now. Doing a good job of introducing new elements in nearly every chapter thus far, so I'm in a constant state of intrigue. Wanna see where it goes.
~TAF TAF was the Storyteller... in THE ENEMY'S LAST RETREAT |
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I am at last all caught up.
Spoiler Alert!
~TAF TAF was the Storyteller... in THE ENEMY'S LAST RETREAT |
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Part one was actually the easiest for me to write, partly because of the tiny space. If I can design the world of my writing entirely and then just explore it, the writing flows easily. And the smaller the world is, the easier it is for me to know how every single piece of it works and is put together. That's what happened with Dan's cell.
Which reminds me: I created both Dan's cell and the SR unit in 3D. There should be an additional drop down under 'Introduction' for each. Also, at some point in part two, there will be a map. ~TGRF. |
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If you haven't already I'd include a link to those somewhere on this thread so new readers can find them easy and early. ~TAF TAF was the Storyteller... in THE ENEMY'S LAST RETREAT |
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It's interesting that you should say you preferred the side characters to Dan in the original Quest. That might be because, knowing nothing about character development at the time, I was able to focus on the side characters as seen through Dan, where Dan was just a blank slate to be acted upon. Ah... the ignorance... Chapter Fourteen is now live! We're fast approaching the eighteenth chapter and the end of part one! ~TGRF, considering a major rewrite of chapters 27-30. |
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Chapter Fifteen - Lie is now posted!
I'm looking into ways to deal with the drop down menu, which is now too big for the screen. ~TGRF. EDIT: Found css for a scrollbar. Last edited by TGRF; February 12th, 2019 at 06:26 PM. |
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Spoiler Alert!
~TAF, curious for the sake of verisimilitude TAF was the Storyteller... in THE ENEMY'S LAST RETREAT |
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Spoiler Alert!
And on that note, Chapter Sixteen - Chance is now live! ~TGRF, who realizes someone not noticing a plot hole is no excuse to leave it in. Next fan fiction. |
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Chapter Seventeen - Guilt is now live!
There's currently a problem with the dropdown menu, where it doesn't let you see the images. I've implemented a temporary third dropdown menu just for the images, titled 'additional content', until I can fix the issue. I'm still working on the revisions for part two, and work is also starting to pile up, so there might be a slight pause in posting after chapter eighteen. Things should resume in a week tops. ~TGRF, who will post the end to part one tomorrow. |
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Yay another tale to read! Good to hear from you tgrf!
Customs here Master Set IV/Assault in the Mournlands. William099 is Lord of Blades... in THE FRACTAL COMPLEX |
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I was wondering when you would show up. Welcome to the story!
~TGRF. |
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