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Re: The Pre-SoV Workshop
I appreciate all of the comments so far. I'll just respond to them and give my plan for revisions.
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I would totally love to make the power like Frost Rage or Crag of Steel as per Scytale's suggestion! I would be totally willing to change the wording and do that. However, I hesitate to make it an entire round after a revealed OM + X, because I think that's too strong a bonus for a 10-point figure. What do you think? Would that be too strong? (The other issue with making Recall Youth's Strength like Frost Rage or Crag of Steel is the factor of Johann's age in his theme/bio. I just don't see this grizzled warrior being able to sustain the glory of his youthful days for 3 turns, for example.) For now, I'll check out Estivara and try to clean this power up in a revision. The power was meant to give him a temporary boost without making the boost too strong for a 10-point figure. Quote:
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Thank you for your time. I will revise him after any further comments. |
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Maybe it would simplify it to make it for just the turn he's taking, drop the defence boost since it's just for his turn and bump his defence to 3.
Really, though, I love the look of this guy! |
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Thanks for the suggestion and the encouragement Lazy Orang. Increasing the base defense and dropping defense from the special power would certainly simplify things. I'm not sure whether that would make him too strong for a 10-point figure, though. I'll have to think about (and maybe play test) that suggestion. |
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Otonashi has 3 defense...so it's not unheard of.
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#1878
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3 Defence really isn't hard to crack, and, as Sir Heroscape said, Otonashi already has it - he'd certainly still be much more killable than Isamu!
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You are both right. I'll work on getting that in the revision. It's probably the simplest way to fix the wording on "Recall Youth's Strength". Thanks for the idea.
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Thank you to everyone for all of the comments! They've helped a lot. After all of the input, here is the revised version of Johann Graybeard:
I'd welcome any additional comments and suggestions for revision over the weekend. Then it's back to play testing for Johann Graybeard. Thanks for the helpful experience I've had with my first custom. |
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@DewNoHarm
I liked him before the revisions, I like him even better now. All the changes made sense, both for sake of theme and simplicity. Isamu obviously beats him in a vacuum, but he fills a few roles that Isamu does not. Good stuff.
I look forward to how he does in testing now (you can count on me to be part of that sometimes)! |
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Last edited by bmon; September 22nd, 2017 at 01:00 PM. Reason: Improper use of this thread |
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Truthfully, anyone can choose to give you feedback or not, but I do think it was explicitly clear in the OP to post here with units that are ready for or being prepared for the SoV and you're seeking some final advice before moving on. I think if your goal is to get help with a custom, you really should keep that to your personal customs thread, otherwise people will come here seeking help on all their customs whether or not they plan on submitting to the SoV, and that's just not fair to the judges who do try to stay active here and helping people with their final preparations before submitting their work. Sir Heroscape's Content
Customs, Maps, Battle Reports YouTube Channel, Trade List, 'Scaper of the Month, Burnout Format Tourney Record: 309 - 141 Online Record: 19 - 22 |
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Thanks! |
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