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Re: The Book of Yondu - Design Phase
It's clearer for sure.
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Re: The Book of Yondu - Design Phase
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#64
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Re: The Book of Yondu - Vote for Initial
You've got too much text here to fit on the card. You'll want to try and simplify it a bit, shave off a couple sentences if possible.
Order Marker is always capitalized as well. |
#65
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Re: The Book of Yondu - Vote for Initial
Fixed the capitalization issue. How much am I over? Might need some help in cutting wordage down.
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#66
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Re: The Book of Yondu - Vote for Initial
I’d start by dropping the entire last line of enhanced arrow. Let him go back and forth between two figures if he keeps hitting 11+. I also wouldn’t be surprised if just calling it Yaka Arrow Frenzy reduced the power name to one line and saved space.
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#67
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Re: The Book of Yondu - Vote for Initial
I'd consider cutting this line as well "adding 2 to the roll if the chosen figure has 1 Life remaining" for simplicity and just making it a slightly lower roll (9+ or 10+).
I'm sure the first power can be condensed, but I'm not up for taking a shot at it right now. C3G can be played with official Heroscape, but it's not recommended.
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#68
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Re: The Book of Yondu - Vote for Initial
Ok edited the 3rd power to
YAKA ARROW FRENZY Once per round, instead of attacking with Yondu, you may choose a figure within 4 spaces and roll the 20-sided die. If you roll 10 or higher, the chosen figure receives one wound and you may choose another figure within 4 spaces of the affected figure. You may continue to choose figures for Enhanced Yaka Arrow in this manner until you fail to roll 10 or higher. |
#69
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Re: The Book of Yondu - Vote for Initial
You’re basically just flipping coins between two figures if that’s all you can target. If you can run up the score, good for you, it’s probably more fun that way
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#70
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Re: The Book of Yondu - Vote for Initial
Looks good to me. yea for initial pending getting wording where it needs to be (in terms of length at least).
C3G can be played with official Heroscape, but it's not recommended.
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Re: The Book of Yondu - Vote for Initial
Nah, I think you're good (realize I'm not Tickle ), just need verification that your cuts do the trick.
C3G can be played with official Heroscape, but it's not recommended.
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