Archmage of Feylund: Writing... (Progress: 20%) Currently Re-Outlining a weak sequence...
Novels: Worldbuilding, Conceptualizing story...
Writer Notes: Issues: Crunched intros (short stories, causing limited time to introduce, causing crunched stage setting and rush to get to action), undeveloped antagonists (fix via antagonist being external representation of Lie, also being present and personal, also being relatable, having strengths and flaws and common sense), squished content (fixed by subplots), Show vs. tell, lack of airtight detail (fix with extensive worlbuilding?). Investigate ability to show background, motivation, and personality through dialogue voice. (BYU-BS). Double-test amping tension - should have no problem with this.
Re: Drunkenly Reviewing Every Low-Rated & Unranked Fiction h
Hmm, well since you have invited me in I will give it the old look-see once I have booze. Don't be surprised if I like it though as nobody tends to be harder on their old work than the authors themselves. Save for the deluded ones.
~TAF, wondering when this became some sort of masochistic scorpiusx "do me next!" sort of thing
TAF was the Storyteller...
in THE ENEMY'S LAST RETREAT