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Re: The Fall of Feylund

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Glad you enjoyed it AMIS! I'm not sure I'm understanding what you're saying in the above though... you would have preferred Alfimir to ask why Aranthar will let him go so that Aranthar could give a deeper reason? Only for Aranthar to then say he'll him later anyway? How come?

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As mentioned this was a very thought provoking book and by the end you begin to wonder who's going to be on what side and how they are going to mentally get there. A fantastic tale that had me thinking throughout.

Just when you thought it was all right, someone made it alright.

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I think I know why you had the reaction to that scene you did. It is not (currently) a set up for anything in book 4, but explaining why Aranthar let Alfimir go might dip a little too heavily into future revelations. For that reason I'm going to leave it there for now. That being said, if I had it to do over again, I would have included said future revelations (some of them anyway) in book 3 to avoid the reaction you've described.

I'm really glad you enjoyed the tale; thought-provoking is what I want, but also just fun stories people can lose themselves in. It sounds like I finally managed to strike the right balance, while keeping issues to a minimum.

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