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Old February 10th, 2019, 02:40 PM
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Re: Horizon in Sight: Dan's Tale

I'm caught up to Ch.6 now. Doing a good job of introducing new elements in nearly every chapter thus far, so I'm in a constant state of intrigue. Wanna see where it goes.

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Re: Horizon in Sight: Dan's Tale

Chapter Thirteen - Prevention is live here!

Not sure what will happen when the drop down menu for HiS gets bigger than the screen... Hopefully it's smart enough to put a scrollbar in there or something.

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Old February 10th, 2019, 10:36 PM
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Re: Horizon in Sight: Dan's Tale

I am at last all caught up.

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Old February 11th, 2019, 01:35 AM
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Re: Horizon in Sight: Dan's Tale

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Part one was actually the easiest for me to write, partly because of the tiny space. If I can design the world of my writing entirely and then just explore it, the writing flows easily. And the smaller the world is, the easier it is for me to know how every single piece of it works and is put together. That's what happened with Dan's cell.

Which reminds me: I created both Dan's cell and the SR unit in 3D. There should be an additional drop down under 'Introduction' for each. Also, at some point in part two, there will be a map.

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Old February 11th, 2019, 02:13 AM
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Re: Horizon in Sight: Dan's Tale

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Which reminds me: I created both Dan's cell and the SR unit in 3D. There should be an additional drop down under 'Introduction' for each. Also, at some point in part two, there will be a map.

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Those are... tremendously helpful. You know what they say about a pic being worth a thousand words. (Boy has that ever been proven true time and time again now that I run D&D games...)

If you haven't already I'd include a link to those somewhere on this thread so new readers can find them easy and early.

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Old February 11th, 2019, 01:17 PM
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Which reminds me: I created both Dan's cell and the SR unit in 3D. There should be an additional drop down under 'Introduction' for each. Also, at some point in part two, there will be a map.

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Those are... tremendously helpful. You know what they say about a pic being worth a thousand words. (Boy has that ever been proven true time and time again now that I run D&D games...)

If you haven't already I'd include a link to those somewhere on this thread so new readers can find them easy and early.

~TAF
Done. Good idea.

It's interesting that you should say you preferred the side characters to Dan in the original Quest. That might be because, knowing nothing about character development at the time, I was able to focus on the side characters as seen through Dan, where Dan was just a blank slate to be acted upon. Ah... the ignorance...

Chapter Fourteen is now live! We're fast approaching the eighteenth chapter and the end of part one!

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Old February 12th, 2019, 03:15 PM
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Re: Horizon in Sight: Dan's Tale

Chapter Fifteen - Lie is now posted!

I'm looking into ways to deal with the drop down menu, which is now too big for the screen.

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EDIT: Found css for a scrollbar.

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Re: Horizon in Sight: Dan's Tale

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And on that note, Chapter Sixteen - Chance is now live!

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Old February 14th, 2019, 02:47 PM
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Re: Horizon in Sight: Dan's Tale

Chapter Seventeen - Guilt is now live!

There's currently a problem with the dropdown menu, where it doesn't let you see the images. I've implemented a temporary third dropdown menu just for the images, titled 'additional content', until I can fix the issue.

I'm still working on the revisions for part two, and work is also starting to pile up, so there might be a slight pause in posting after chapter eighteen. Things should resume in a week tops.

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Re: Horizon in Sight: Dan's Tale

Yay another tale to read! Good to hear from you tgrf!

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