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Old August 16th, 2007, 12:51 AM
Spark Spark is offline
 
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First card.

hey this is my first time making a custom so please tell me if you like it
and if im missing anything.




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Old August 16th, 2007, 08:35 AM
SoulfulKillingMachine SoulfulKillingMachine is offline
 
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1. Only unique heroes can have life.
2. Replace Splash Damage with Explosion Special Attack; it's much too strong and potentially game-breaking if it can be affected by height.
3. Demo Pack is not a special attack.
4. The text could be a lot better. Proper capitalization, color, formatting, centering, and of course spelling really make a difference. Copy and paste as much as you can from existing cards.
5. Are you sure you don't have a higher resolution picture?

Other than that, it looks fine. Simple enough to be playable, but different from what we have. You should be proud that you didn't go overboard with powers.
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Old August 16th, 2007, 10:53 AM
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Originally Posted by SoulfulKillingMachine
1. Only unique heroes can have life.
2. Replace Splash Damage with Explosion Special Attack; it's much too strong and potentially game-breaking if it can be affected by height.
3. Demo Pack is not a special attack.
4. The text could be a lot better. Proper capitalization, color, formatting, centering, and of course spelling really make a difference. Copy and paste as much as you can from existing cards.
5. Are you sure you don't have a higher resolution picture?

Other than that, it looks fine. Simple enough to be playable, but different from what we have. You should be proud that you didn't go overboard with powers.
Okay thank's I will try again later.

P.S.i did'nt know that common hero's did not have life because i dont have any common's.
yet
also when i noticed the spelling it was to late to change it.
Duz any one else have anything to say?

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Old August 16th, 2007, 01:27 PM
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Center your text and try experimenting with different text fonts, colors, and sizes, but not too bad a card, just needs some revising.
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