Thoughts for tourney armies

[ScapeRaider]

Hey guys! This is my first tourney and I'm slowly getting involved in the site, but I'd rather not flail around helplessly in my first match. A friend suggested these armies, which I tweaked a little, but I was wondering if I could get the general community's opinions on them before I submitted them officially to the tournament. All comments and thoughts welcome. Thanks!

Zombies or Morindan x4
Zombie Hulk x3
Deadeye Dan
Kira jax
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=500 pts, 23 spaces
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Strategy is pretty*self-evident here: Deadeye Dan can*weaken some of*the opponent's ranged squads, which'll be the greatest threat*to the Zombies (Deadeye Dan works against Krav Maga too, which is why I picked him specifically). BTW, you get 24 spaces in your starting zone right? Because this army's a pretty tight fit...
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Blade Gruts x2
Death Chasers of Thesk x3
Me-Burq-Sa
Ornak
Tornak
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=495 pts, 22 spaces
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I'm not liking the low defense capabilities of this one, but the mobility and aggression of this army is*impressive. I've never played an army with such weak defense, though, so I'm not entirely sure this is a good idea...

I directly copy-pasted that from the email and then made my edits, so I very heavily plagiarized the guy. I don't know his Heroscape ID though, but if you see this buddy comment please (bobinchese, it's our trumpet playing friend if you know his ID)
Again, thanks for the help.

[ScapeRaider]

Immediately after posting this, I found the thread where it was supposed to go. My bad, it can be found there now