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Old February 20th, 2014, 07:07 PM
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Re: Nether World Rising - Chapter 2

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Chapter 3 is added:

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A really good read, keep up the good work.
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Old August 22nd, 2022, 12:05 PM
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Re: Nether World Rising - Chapter 3

@Joseph Sweeney . Finish this. I love how fast paced and descriptive it is. Very well written. Please, please finish this.

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Old August 22nd, 2022, 02:21 PM
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Re: Nether World Rising - Chapter 3

I genuinely have no memory of this at all for some reason, but I'll echo EL. It would be awesome to have more active fan fictions in here. I've added this to the index.

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Old August 22nd, 2022, 06:10 PM
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Re: Nether World Rising - Chapter 3

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@Joseph Sweeney . Finish this. I love how fast paced and descriptive it is. Very well written. Please, please finish this.
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I genuinely have no memory of this at all for some reason, but I'll echo EL. It would be awesome to have more active fan fictions in here. I've added this to the index.

~TGRF.
Thank you both for the kind words!

I'm unsure if I'll ever touch it again, my writing has improved substantially since then and I'm actually almost finished with a novel I'd like to try and get published, and it demands a lot of my free time.

I will say, I definitely owe some of my improvement to reading the fan-fictions here at HSers, most notable being TGRF's fictions. Maybe with time I'll start a new project here.

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Old August 22nd, 2022, 06:54 PM
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Re: Nether World Rising - Chapter 3

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Thank you both for the kind words!

I'm unsure if I'll ever touch it again, my writing has improved substantially since then and I'm actually almost finished with a novel I'd like to try and get published, and it demands a lot of my free time.

I will say, I definitely owe some of my improvement to reading the fan-fictions here at HSers, most notable being TGRF's fictions. Maybe with time I'll start a new project here.

~JS
Hey, well done! I'm honored to think that my writings have helped in some small way. If you ever need another writer to bounce theories/ideas off of, don't hesitate to shoot me a PM.

What genre is the novel, if I might ask?

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Re: Nether World Rising - Chapter 3

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Hey, well done! I'm honored to think that my writings have helped in some small way. If you ever need another writer to bounce theories/ideas off of, don't hesitate to shoot me a PM.

What genre is the novel, if I might ask?

~TGRF.
I mean of course, your writing style is exceptional and I’ve also played too many CoN games with you.

I also very much appreciate the willingness to help, I am actually in need of some thoughts on a particular passage in the book so I’ll shoot that over to you either tonight or tomorrow and talk about what I was thinking. Thanks, man!

I supposed it’d fall into Medieval Fantasy Fiction as a genre but has elements of horror and tragedy as well. It’s honestly been a blast to write.

~JS
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Re: Nether World Rising - Chapter 3

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I mean of course, your writing style is exceptional and I’ve also played too many CoN games with you.

I also very much appreciate the willingness to help, I am actually in need of some thoughts on a particular passage in the book so I’ll shoot that over to you either tonight or tomorrow and talk about what I was thinking. Thanks, man!

I supposed it’d fall into Medieval Fantasy Fiction as a genre but has elements of horror and tragedy as well. It’s honestly been a blast to write.

~JS
Glad to hear it's been fun to write. And of course, I enjoy talking about writing and working through ideas/problems with other people. It gives me a fresh perspective and can sometimes help with my own writing. Happy to do it.

Seeing how this was only three short chapters, I went ahead and read through it. I'm going to give it somewhere between a 7 and an 8, probably closer to a 7. The story itself moved quickly and did manage to create a pretty good sense of foreboding, as we started to wonder what these people were running into. Certainly a lot of spelling and grammar errors, but I was able to ignore those for the most part and just enjoy the all-too-short ride.

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