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Post Rise of the Valkyrie - Utgar

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Hello, readers, writers, and viewers. Yep. I'm back. *standing ovation occurs*

Well, it's been almost exactly a year since I began posting HiS, and many hours of extensive research later, I feel like I've gone light years forward in terms of writing skill. At least I hope so. I'll leave you to judge.

At the time I wrote this, it was supposed to be the start of a large series, which I was calling Eternity. After writing this fan fiction, that series fell through. You can now assume that this fan fiction is a normal stand-alone story, and can ignore any references to sequels or a series within this thread.

The title of this fan fiction is Utgar. Utgar comes in at 25 pages, 12.8k words (including introduction), and ten chapters.

Much of this information is reiterated in the introduction. Be sure to read the introduction, as it contains some important information related to the setting.

I will post this fan fiction chapter by chapter, as I did with HiS. Note that this fiction was original posted on my website. I have since moved it here. It is no longer on the website.

So all that being said, let's get into it. This post contains the preliminary Author's Note and Introduction, and Chapter One is posted below.

~TGRF.

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Acknowledgements
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Author's Note
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Introduction
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Chapter One
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Re: Rise of the Valkyrie - Utgar

@BiggaBullfrog @TheAverageFan @hose @William099

Eternity has begun. Make sure to read the intro, linked above, as it explains some important stuff.

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Re: Rise of the Valkyrie - Utgar

Ooh, sudden fanfiction!

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Re: Rise of the Valkyrie - Utgar

I like it so far. I always wanted to issue a Prompt for the Contest where you had to write about one of the Valkyrie, specifically with them starting out opposite to how they ended up.

I assume Migol in this is not the same as the Dwarf. That would be a bold storytelling choice though

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Re: Rise of the Valkyrie - Utgar

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I like it so far. I always wanted to issue a Prompt for the Contest where you had to write about one of the Valkyrie, specifically with them starting out opposite to how they ended up.

I assume Migol in this is not the same as the Dwarf. That would be a bold storytelling choice though

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No, Migol, as in the Tomb of Migol.

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Re: Rise of the Valkyrie - Utgar

Chapter Two
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I did have a concern with these first few chapters, that it wouldn't be super clear what was going on. So do let me know if there's any confusion.

~TGRF.

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Re: Rise of the Valkyrie - Utgar

I've also added an Author's Note. It primarily talks about what aspects of writing I worked on for this fan fiction, and is completely skippable if you're not interested in that sort of thing.

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Re: Rise of the Valkyrie - Utgar

Chapter Three
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I also plan on updating the cover so that it says 'Rise of the Valkyrie' instead of 'Eternity'. Also, I've got to say, I love that cover. First time I've attempted to draw photo-realistic hair. Marginally successful, but workable I think.

Also keep in mind that Bigga has mysteriously disappeared, so I had no one on this fan fiction to tell me if it was working or not. So if you see something you want to critique, please do so.

~TGRF.

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Re: Rise of the Valkyrie - Utgar

Chapter Four
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As the full measure of Utgar's existence as a prisoner is made clear, a sudden change forever alters his destiny...

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Re: Rise of the Valkyrie - Utgar

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So if you see something you want to critic, please do so.

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Hmm, well there is one thing.

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