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[William099]

Added my first Marvel card!

[Red Eyed Jedi]

Cards look good William099. I didn't have time to read each units specials, except for War Machine who seems well done. Kinda reminds me of Quiggly but nothing wrong that.
I have a friend who loves Halo If it's cool I might print a few units out and give them a spin. Are they well balanced with each other? Any team suggestions?

[William099]

Sgt. Maj. Johnson
Flamethrower
Orbital Drop Shock Troopers
3x Marines
UNSC Snipers

Arbiter
Brutes
Jackals
Minor Elites
2x Needler Grunts
2x Plasma Pistol Grunts

Here are a couple 750 point armies I thought up I haven't got to play them yet since I don't have all the figs I would need as far as I can tell they should be well balanced feel free to go for it. I have play tested Flamethrower, 2x Hunters, Jackals with Isamu as my filler for 500 points and it went pretty well.

[Red Eyed Jedi]

Cool man thanks. My buddy has a birthday coming up and he's been wanting me to make some Halo customs for our local game, but I just don't have the time. Seems like a perfect opportunity to get these on my scape table. I'll let ya know how it goes. Should have some feedback for ya the weekend after Easter.

[JC McMinis]

One note on your War Machine card. He should have the Super Strength logo

[William099]

Originally Posted by jcmcminis

One note on your War Machine card. He should have the Super Strength logo

thanks yeah i forgot that.

[William099]

Originally Posted by William099

Reorganizing the OP due to a diversified card scheme now.

MARVEL
Adding my first marvel card!

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HALO
The Jackals and Hunters are my own original ideas, on the other hand the Plasma Pistol Grunts, Needler Grunts, Minor Elites, and Arbiter and the Snipers, Marines, ODSTS, SGT. Johnson and both master chief's are the ideas of SamuraiLord and GeneralGrievous13
some of which I just put on a different card template others of which I did some rewording of. I have asked permission of General Grevious to have these up here if he disapproves I will remove them posthaste.
The Brutes are a rework of Oraln's and it is his card template that I am using I have also asked him for permission to have done this.

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COVENANT

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Hunter:


Jackals:


Plasma Pistol Grunts


Needler Grunts


Minor Elites


Brutes


Arbiter

UNSC

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UNSC Snipers


UNSC Marines


Spartan Red Team


Spartan Blue Team


Sgt. Maj. Johnson


Orbital Drop Shock Troopers


Master Chief


Master Chief (Spartan Laser)


Flamethrower

DUNGEONS AND DRAGONS

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My most recent Warforged D&D custom

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My next Warforged D&D custom is the Warforged Infiltrators unique squad.

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My first D&D custom. It uses the D&D mini Warforged Barbarian. I changed the mechanics of his fatigue ability so let me know what you guys think.

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WARCRAFT III

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This first one is the phoenix that Kael'Thas summons. I gave it Searing Intensity because it does fire damage to adjacent characters in the actual game. The question for this figure is the pricing with the Rebirth ability fair? I have play tested this one only once, and used a retchet of bogdan to proxy, some miniature suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Update: Increased move by two attack/defense by one because I received feedback that it was under priced as it was.
Update: Changed the phoenix to a summon similar to the Retchets.

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Proxyed these guys with Templar, play tested them at least three times, seem fairly well balanced, Animal War Training didn't make them overly difficult to kill as far as my friends were concerned.

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Proxyed this guy with Chardris. What do you guys make of the mechanics of banish? He was originally 3 life but after playing him he seemed to squishy so his health was increased to 4.
Update: Gave Kael'Thas a power similar to Iskra's Retchet summoning.
Update: Kael'thas needed the Lava Resistant Special Power because he was immune to fire in the game.

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His heal ability could use some wording work, but I like his inner fire, need a figure for him because currently I am using Chardris as a proxy. I had given him the dispel magic ability from the game but couldn't figure out how to make it work, I had it dispelling defense bonuses of any kind (which was sticky cause that negated height) so I scratched that power and lowered the cost from 100 to 80 and dropped his attack by 1 to compensate for the cheaper price. Anyone got any suggestions for how to make dispel magic work? in WCIII it dispels positive buffs on enemies and negative buffs on friendlies.

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Proxyed Jaina with Ana Kairthron. The language on her card needs a lot of work especially the summon water elementals power. Mass Teleport is nice, it was originally written to be when she rolled a 1 or a 20 which do you guys think it should be? Originally had a brilliance aura that acted as a lucky twenty sider but I scratched that cause it seemed to difficult to operate in game.
Update: Increased Jaina's range because she needed to have some reason to want to use her normal attack over her blizzard attack.

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Used Sir Denrick as a proxy for Arthas. Played him multiple times and had really no issues with any of his powers. Seems pretty well balanced just need to work out how to make him bond with the Footmen of Lordaeron.

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Proxying these guys with Knights of Weston. Work really well Defense doesn't make them to bad, problem is that Human Hero bonding. Some of my friends expressed that makes them to versatile I wanted them to bond with both Jaina and Arthas (paladin) and the only thing those two had in common was human, maybe someone can help me out with that.
Update: Changed bonding to Royalty Bonding which lets them bond with both Kael'thas and Arthas since they operate with both heroes in Warcraft 3.
Update: Changed my mind about the bonding again back to Human Royalty

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Finding a figure for these guys is the biggest thing, I am using the fourth mass to play them, but the dwarves long rifle power was to strong with a squad of four so we bumped em down to a squad of three. I am using Magic Set Editor to make my cards and I could not find any dwarf rifleguys to use for the hit zone pic so that will need adjustment. They bond with Muradin Bronzebeard which worked well.

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For Muradin I proxyed him with Migol Ironwill. His Storm Bolt power is supposed to simulate the stun affect he makes in game. What do you all think about the damage on his Thunder Clap ability? Is it to high for an attack that affects all adjacent figures?

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This guy is Arthas after he has become a Death Knight, I didn't want him to be fielded in the same army as Arthas the Paladin because it would not make any thematic sense. Coil of Death like Holy Light did not seem to cause that many problems, nor did Death Pact since he only gets to use it once, many times he got killed before he could use it anyways. I have been proxying him with Me-Burq-Sa. Animate Dead's language could use some work, the two squad figures can be anyone's yours or your opponents, and they have the same base stats as they did in life but they cannot use their special powers, thats not really explained in the card though. The biggest problem with Arthas was his Unholy Aura. When playing him my friends thought the three sight spaces on the Aura (which the card needs to say) was too much, do you guys agree? If so what should be done to change it? Make it only adjacent or 2 sight spaces? Or lower the move bonus to +1?

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CONTEST

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Saint Patrick

How do I delete this post? I didn't mean to put it up here...

[William099]

Originally Posted by Red Eyed Jedi

Cool man thanks. My buddy has a birthday coming up and he's been wanting me to make some Halo customs for our local game, but I just don't have the time. Seems like a perfect opportunity to get these on my scape table. I'll let ya know how it goes. Should have some feedback for ya the weekend after Easter.

Awesome thanks!!

[William099]

CHCG24 versions of Rorshack's cards added to the OP.

[William099]

Well things are looking good. Rorshack is under review by the SOV and Auggies has agreed to list him on his site so anyone who liked what they saw feel free to swing on by!

[caps]

I know you've already had feedback on Watcher, but I wanted to offer my .

I would switch "animal" bonding to something else, maybe something based on class or personality; maybe Construct, Hunter, Raider, Scout, Relentless (you'll want a size restriction on Relentless), Mindless, Ferocious, Arachnid, Elemental, Viper, Wolf...

Although I think that would be hard to pull off. You might be better off giving him some other ability and/or making him bond with an already-existing squad or hero. He could be a Relentless hero (bonding with Death Knights--not very appropriate, thematically), or reasonable Ullar Warlord (bonding with Armoc Vipers), maybe a Predator (bonding with Fyorlag spiders), a Tribesman (bonding with Mohican River Tribe, a little more thematic), or a Warlord (bonding with Roman Legionaires).

Still, I think he makes more sense without bonding. You should give him some sort of entanglement power, or an ability that lets him camouflage himself or something.

Lightning Bolt Special Attack is worded in a confusing way. You should either specify that it is an area-of-affect attack, or just say something like "If Watcher inflicts a wound on the targeted figure with Lightning Bolt Special Attack, he may attack the targeted figure two additional times."

[William099]

How about this instead of the bonding?

Natural camoflauge
If Watcher is standing on a shadow space or is adjacent to a jungle piece, opponents' figures must be adjacent to attack him with a normal attack.

And should I use yours or awesomeunleashed's wording for lightning bolt?

"If Watcher inflicts a wound on the targeted figure with Lightning Bolt Special Attack, he may attack the targeted figure two additional times."

"If Watcher inflicts at least one wound with Lightning Bolt Special Attack, he may attack the defending figure two additional times with Lightning Bolt Special Attack."