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Old January 21st, 2012, 01:50 PM
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Re: The Price of Un-life

I realize that by adding this chapter (which was also submitted on the Fan-fic competition) is kind of like cheating. Still though, this character may become staple to the story. To compensate for this "cheat", I will also be posting another chapter either today or tomorrow.

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Old January 21st, 2012, 09:16 PM
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Aha! You're back! I can go update the book now...
Keep the chapters coming, this is becoming one interesting fan fiction.
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Old January 21st, 2012, 10:38 PM
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Re: The Price of Un-life

Melikes! Good job SOA! Just a suggestion. I find that lengthy chapters can become tedious to read. I'm trying to shorten mine. If you've read OB's fanfics Kit Young Ninja and the sequel Vengeance, you'll notice that he writes his in short chapters. Each one fits on a computer screen, and only occasionally excedes it. The writing is great on this one, but I would appreciate slightly less lengthy chapters than the one above. Thanks.

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Old February 9th, 2012, 11:23 PM
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Re: The Price of Un-life

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Melikes! Good job SOA! Just a suggestion. I find that lengthy chapters can become tedious to read. I'm trying to shorten mine. If you've read OB's fanfics Kit Young Ninja and the sequel Vengeance, you'll notice that he writes his in short chapters. Each one fits on a computer screen, and only occasionally excedes it. The writing is great on this one, but I would appreciate slightly less lengthy chapters than the one above. Thanks.
And here I was worrying that they weren't long enough! I'm not sure if I can release shorter chapters, as it makes me feel like I'm not doing any real work. Perhaps if I write a chapter, but then cut it into smaller portions...

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Old February 9th, 2012, 11:25 PM
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How's this, Elven Lord?


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Old June 2nd, 2012, 11:57 AM
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Re: The Price of Un-life

So, it's been quite a while since my last addition to this story, for which I apologize. Hopefully this will (at least somewhat) make up for my absence.

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